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Gotcha

I'm really sorry if this chapter came out pretty confusing because of the grammar issues and I've being doing my best in editing each time I spot a problem. All in all thank you for you constructive criticism

I think there's a lot of confusion with regards this chapter and I guess I didn't write it how I was imagining it but let me clear it up: 1. First of all, the personality of Luis is someone who tends to get confused when a little bit under pressure and he mixes up his words sometimes so I tried to make that dialogue as realistic as how I thought of it sorry if it confused you. 2. If you check the previous chapter you'd realise that Luis thought of a way to cancel his appointment with his sister to go out with Sam. 3. About the him being surrounded by fire thing and Sam jacking the phone of his hand, I've checked it and I noticed I omitted a few words there my bad. I've corrected them though and thank you for your comment

I love the thriller about the the story think it has a promising future still needs work but it improved as I read. Overall it's really nice

wow lovely story. Typical romance story. I haven't really gone deep in to it but overall it's really impressive. Very clear grammar plus the dialogues look believable. Keep it up😁😁😁

Can't rate this any better. Typical romance story, I've actually been searching for something like this for some time now. I wouldn't stop reading this for a while I guess

Nice plot. Very believable story. Also some of your sentences are breaking into paragraphs. Maybe you could check that out. Anyway thanks for your review on mine