Thanks. :) I will try to write on time so that the chapters come out often.

The author recommends rereading the story and editing it. If you fix everything, you'll get a good story. Thanks for attention.

This is a story with cultivation, where the heroes usually look for ways to obtain divine (or demonic) power. Reading this story, for some reason I wanted to reread Shall Seal the Heavens. It's facilitated by the unusual pleasant atmosphere prevailing in this story. It is clear that the author tries hard and writes in one breath. Because of this, there are typos and mistake in the text that would be worth editing and correcting in a good way. And despite this, I liked this story! Thank you author! And of course, what kind of story will do without romance... ;) It remains to hope that the FL will find her love.

Wait a minute, so Rushuang or Rushang... Which of the options is correct?

I wanted to know why Rushuang is written with a small letter? Is that how it was intended?

Mom may be the heavenly Empress? Or is it still the emperor...

A paragraph less than 70 words? Thank you for advice. I'll try to make it.

By the way, is it on purpose to write Xia with a small letter? The rulers from the Xia Dynasty will be very sad. :(

Who

I agree with the previous comment.

What.

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Looks like no. Maybe it's better to write x with a capital letter?

Country X? Is this mistake?

A rather unusual story about a boy and a girl in the entourage of a supernatural fantasy. There is everything here, a complex with its own rules, black rooms, researchers and endless tests. And there are also subjects here who day and night dream of escaping from this place and remembering who they are and where their place is in this world. It is a pity that the chapters in this work are so short that you just start reading them and delving into the essence of the problem, and they are already ending. Thank you for the work done by the author, I wish you good luck! With respect, L. Marchen.

I join the previous comment. Maybe some cute name. C-3PO or R2-D2? ;)

This is a story about Pinky and Brain. Oops. I wanted to say about Girl and Boy... :D

This is a rather unusual narrative. I'm really curious to know what's going on here at all?

Author, I greet you. It's a fascinating story, but it sinks under various flaws. Of course, this is my subjective point and I don't want to offend you. I recommend rephrasing sentences with a large number of pronouns "I", and also adding quotation marks for direct speech. Perhaps at the beginning of the story you should add a brief reference, "Who is who", so that later there will be no confusion. Who is Andrey? He's the boss's assistant. Clear. And who is this. Kelvin. Okay. Thanks for the story. It is clear that you have made best effort to write it. I will definitely finish it. :) Respectfully, L. Machen.