MrMIST

Wow, that's some great praise I didn't expect to receive today, thanks. I was planning to update the magic system, so I could use some other references, I'll have to check it out! Have a great day

Hello there, Thanks for your insight, I have no clue whether you'll ever read this, but let me thank you for your review, I know that the system was pretty loose at times, so I'll try to improve on that. My ability to write comes from a bit of studying and a handy dandy tool that highlights most of my obvious mistakes (though it can't do everything), though I'm trying my best to not repeat the same ones again. All in all, thanks and have a nice day ;)

I appreciate your comment, though you might be praising me a little too much. Still, thank you, you didn't have to write this, yet you took the time out of your day to tell me, a random amateur writer, this. Thank you, really

Hello there, sorry I'm so late with responding, I took quite a long break. First impression, yeah, you're right, absolutely. I can't really argue with your viewpoint of villains. Still, I want to write the MC as how I imagine it, not forcing him into a certain character type. I have no idea if you'll ever read this, but thank you. Truly. I'm bad with criticism, but at least you bring a foundation and good arguments. Makes it a lot easier to deal with and let it flow into the story. I have a few ideas on how to proceed and I'll try to make it as interesting as I can. As always. Have a great day

I know, there are a lot of things that I'm also not that happy with, but hey, it was a pretty decent attempt. I'm not an author, just some dude with a bit of inspiration, but I'm glad to see some opinions otherwise I wouldn't know what to do. Thanks to you I've gotten rid of some future chapters where he lived peacefully, removed and changed into something more cold. Thanks for the feedback btw

He was just a kid though, I do want to create a villainous character, but I felt like I needed to show some form of growth. If he was immediately a perfect scheming villain, it wouldn't make that much sense to me. I don't want him to be the next generic demon lord without any reasons for killing you know, but thank you for your feedback

I toned it down a bit, I didn't realize it was so long

I hope you keep enjoying it because there's a lot more to come.