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Sea_Light

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2022-06-24 入りましたGlobal
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light1mth
    コメント

    Huh, I surprised that no one commented on this.

    "How is my body worth any money?" asked Ei in her perpetual calm voice.
    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light1mth
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    I want Mommy to step on me (but without her high heels 💀)

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    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light1mth
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    It supposed to be "she" instead of "he" right?

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    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light1mth
    に返信 Snowings

    Well, yeah. Obviously, according to the plot, Inazuma is an unstable country, it's even placed in an isolated island. In contrast, Liyue is a very wealthy nation and its currency is shared throughout Teyvat. This shows how clear Mihoyo's "intentions" are.

    Ei stood silent, pondering. She had no confidence in beating Morax. She knew she wouldn't lose, but winning was another story. Still, her Mussou Isshin was extremely good against the Lord of Geo's shields, she could cut through everything, but Morax' ability to cause massive destruction was unparalleled. She couldn't fight him and protect Inazuma from hundreds of meteors.
    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light1mth
    に返信 Madara_Taz

    This is normal, a person should have the obligation to respect the head of their country even if he/she is not perfect, it's all about patriotism, my friend.

    Ch 57 A misunderstood person
    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
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    You're right, even though Shogun is a waifu, people seem to forget that she's an emotionless tyrant. And her personality is also very strange and confusing.

    And just like that, the main 'villain' was suddenly a 'good character'. But because Ei had boobs, everyone accepted it.
    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
    に返信 Sea_Light

    But in the end I only gave it 4 stars. Because the author has a strange typing habit, you always write " ?. ". If it is a question, use "?", otherwise use "." , no one will write them together. Although it's not a big deal, it can sometimes be uncomfortable to read. Finally, this review is written using Google translate, so please forgive me if there are things you don't understand. Thank you.

    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
    に返信 Sea_Light

    Another thing I agree with the author is the time it takes for the girls to develop feelings. I certainly don't want to read a story where a couple kisses and makes love in the first chapter. Why do people like such quick love? I want a romcom story where MC and FMC realize their feelings for each other at the end of the story. And this story pleased me very much.

    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
    発表

    Hello author, I have finished reading the latest chapter of this story and wanted to leave some thoughts. First of all, I need to say that I've never played Genshin Impact before, but I have read so many fanfics of it that I can understand the setting and characters quite specifically. And from my experience, this is definitely one of the Genshin fics that makes me the most satisfied. As I said, about the plot, this story has a fairly slow pace, the characters that interact with the MC are very realistic, and the MC's personality is also quite interesting to me. Next is what most Webnovel readers are interested in: the Harem. This is definitely a very difficult topic to write about because the author needs to build the emotional path between the characters as logically as possible. There was even a reader who literally recommended 99% of the Genshin girls into the MC's harem. It's very cringe. In my opinion, A good harem is the harem with about 4-5 people, more than that will bore the readers.

    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
    に返信 Na1gel

    Yes, you're absolutely right. The guy above is literally me 1 year ago. At that time I was just a stupid kid who always talked about things like OP MC or mass harem,... After realizing how crigne I was, I gradually stopped commenting on webnovel, and at the same time I don't want others to repeat my mistakes.

    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
    に返信 Yachii_

    Ignore him, he is just a typical webnovel reader.

    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
    発表

    Are you the one on FF.net? You two have the different names, ........................... ........................... ...........................

    The Exeter Project
    アニメ·コミックス · Jacob_0888
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light2mth
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    I think the developers will favor Morax more because, you know, Liyue refers to China in real life, and Mihoyo is a Chinese company, so...

    Ei stood silent, pondering. She had no confidence in beating Morax. She knew she wouldn't lose, but winning was another story. Still, her Mussou Isshin was extremely good against the Lord of Geo's shields, she could cut through everything, but Morax' ability to cause massive destruction was unparalleled. She couldn't fight him and protect Inazuma from hundreds of meteors.
    Souls in Teyvat
    ゲーム · ARandomMob
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light6mth
    発表

    Not a fanfic but why you post it here? In fanfic section? ......................... ......................... ......................... .........................

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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light6mth
    コメント

    The grammar seems too literary and flowery, did you use AI to write or proofread? I'm just asking

    Ch 1 Green - 1
    Archer of Green
    アニメ·コミックス · SpacesSnips
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light6mth
    発表

    Me after reading the synopsis of Chinese novel Why the hell do people still want to translate bullsh!t stories like this? (no offense) ....

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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light8mth
    発表

    I know you mentioned this story on Scribble Hub but why did you arbitrarily change its name? To me this is nothing more than blatant copying, you didn't even leave any signs such as the author's name or the title of the original story. Even though you took credit for the story, the most important thing that you never asked the original author's permission. If I were him, I would be very disappointed and angry.

    Danmachi: Goddesses Chosen One
    アニメ·コミックス · Joyboy2023
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light9mth
    に返信 ImagineMaker

    My suggestion is Lead Lead Fruit /Paper Paper Fruit/Cement Cement Fruit/Dust Dust Fruit/Bubble Bubble Fruit/Silk Silk Fruit, they are not too strong but not too weak either, also suitable for creativity and flexibility.

    Ch 2 Saint Mark
    One piece : Celestial Rose
    アニメ·コミックス · ImagineMaker
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light9mth
    に返信 Mr_Cuak

    Bruh seriously? That will be typical and boring. The only way to make OP fanfic better is to create your own DF

    Ch 2 Saint Mark
    One piece : Celestial Rose
    アニメ·コミックス · ImagineMaker
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  • Sea_Light
    Sea_Light9mth
    コメント

    Wow you really put your heart into this story. Many authors don't even write 800 words per chapter, they just divide their work into small pieces to get more views.

    In any case, this was quite a long one wasn't it? Approximately six thousand words! I mean holy shit! I'm sure I've been writing a lot of gibberish here and there. That's because I kinda grew impatient. Trust me. I'm also agonizing in anticipation on when I could write the finale..
    Outsider – Classroom Of The Elite
    ファンタジー · Jomby
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