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  • 1yr
    に返信 funkiller_562

    Thank you with your kind words of encouragement

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  • 1yr
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    I‘m giving you 5 because you got me hooked. I’m gonna continue to read and finish the story you wrote. This is very good from the very beginning to the end.

    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    ファンタジー · funkiller_562
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  • 1yr
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    I like the story overall. It has great potential to become an anime or show. Keep up the good work because this story got me really interested in it.

    Ascension of the Monster Queen
    ファンタジー · Darkswan
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  • 1yr
    に返信 Mary_Onaduja

    Thank you for your feedback I will keep it in mind. I appreciate your support.

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  • 1yr
    に返信 Mary_Onaduja

    Thank you

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    Kyle went from a nice polite person to a cold badass one I just wanna know if he’s going to die at the end because the Quadbrid he has to fight has no weaknesses

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  • 1yr
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    This is Interesting at first I couldn’t tell who the main character was but now I think I know. Keep up the good work, your story is really good.

    Falling In a Never-ending Dream
    歴史 · _Nightin_gale_
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  • 1yr
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    Good job on your story overall. I like the pacing and the back and forth point of view for both sisters. Keep up the good work because this could be turned into a movie or show.

    The enchanted gem
    若者 · Mary_Onaduja
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  • 1yr
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    Just like anyone else would he accepted it like a true person in debt

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  • 1yr
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    Wow a attempt to save her best friend failed

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    This was deadly he even tried to say the devil did it.

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  • 1yr
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    The story is overall good and the build up is nice. Maybe try building into the next chapter because it could leave people confused. Other than that you have some typos but your story is good.

    The Vengeful Cosa Nostra
    ファンタジー · Scorpious_star
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  • 1yr
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    I like that there’s different gods and he can become one. I like the story altogether because he becomes super op. Keep up the good work if I was a representative I’d get you a contract

    CREATION GOD
    ファンタジー · inner_pa1n
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  • 1yr
    に返信 inner_pa1n

    I update the story daily or every 2 days never longer than 3 days for another cha pter

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  • 1yr
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    Good story overall I like it despite that I’m not really a fan of romance but it’s a good story overall the suspense the sadness you can really tell that he was in love with her

    HALF A HEART
    現実 · Azure04
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  • 1yr
    に返信 Azure04

    Thank you

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