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Shayan212

Shayan212

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I'm tired of novels filled with bs.

2022-06-20 入りましたGlobal
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  • Shayan212
    Shayan2124 months ago
    に返信 Shayan212

    And to make life abit easier once you're done writing and want to edit everything go on chatgpt and write : edit this. It will fix the grammar and spelling .

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2124 months ago
    に返信 Sokdavid

    I suggest rather than rewriting and publish it from chapter 252 and up I think it's best to edit the chapters and put them in. Btw I have a book too I started re edit all my chapters again because the writing is bad XD. I haven't published the edits yet though I'm being lazy XD. keep it up. I like the idea of this novel. Even though the writing was not up to my standards I still read the whole book. GG

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2124 months ago
    発表

    To all new readers. Start from chapter 252 That's where the rewritten version starts. The chapters bellow 252 have horrible quality. <3

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2124 months ago
    に返信 Shayan212

    I mean 250 chapters

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2124 months ago
    発表

    I finished reading the whole thing. It's only 25 chapters as after chapter 25 the author decided to rewrite the story which means that after 250 the story goes back to chapter 1 because the writer wants to make the story flawless . It is a good idea but the execution is not very good. Lots of shocking people for some reason. I loved the Godzilla King Kong evolution. Especially godzilla. Planet creation is in depth which I loved. But the interaction between the characters are too shallow. The Mc doesn't have enough depth to it. He feels like a side character. These points can be improved as the writer rewrites the story . As for the competitions please be abit more creative. I loved the survival aspect of the protoss ark please make more of that style[img=update]

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2124 months ago
    発表

    Hello and good day everyone . I'm the translator for this book but unfortunately I lost the account info after I was drafted to overseas. I will try to get it back and hopefully restart the translation. I'm sorry again for not have been able to publish much of anything ,I wasn't able to.

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2127 months ago
    発表

    Chapter 927 + I need a hero song = perfection

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2122 years ago
    に返信 Jan_Kowtow

    Chrystaline 12 headed celestial dragons

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2122 years ago
    発表

    I love the world idea and the story idea. But first off translation 3/10 I'm sorry but I have to be honest . Second the whole story so far has been developing another xia dynasty and just shocking people. Third Mc character development is close to zero. As much as I love the idea the story is empty. It takes 200+ chapters to get into a university which is BULLSH1T. we I might just steal the idea of making a world within the body and use it in my novel.

  • Shayan212
    Shayan2122 years ago
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    Devil may cry