Medic_o_Loki

Advised—>avoided

This last few paragraphs make no sense! The errors in names, pronouns, and verb tenses have made it incomprehensible! I’m reading it as: the 3rd Prince was able to stop the Lord Duke from becoming the Emperor, the young Crown Prince had been drugged into passivity (I’m worried that he will not be able to reach his full potential intellectually related to this, as he was a very, very, VERY smart child), and was named Emperor. Meanwhile in the other part of the country, our FL’s brothers in the military kept the Lord Duke’s allies from not only reaching the capital and intervening, but had the power players in that group in custody, preventing them from stirring up the populace. Am I interpreting it correctly? Did anyone come up with another rendition of the events? Has Author-chan clarified it in a comment somewhere? Inquiring minds want to know!

Is angry bacon extra peppery??

It should be “she” instead of “her”. If you have a question on which one to use substitute the proper name for the pronoun. If the sentence makes sense then it’s “she” but if you need to add the possessive form of “ ‘s “ to the name to have the sentence make sense then it’s “her”. Also works for he/his, they/their, it/its (no apostrophe!), us/our.

There’s an image right before bed.