Kinara_Brian_Brian

I like the plot, the general flow of the story. The setting is is amazingly fine with events that are lit. I also like the way you begun the story, any avid reader would be glued to it wanting more of it. I just encourage you to keep it up girl. Your work is amazing.

Am in love with the flow of the story. Each chapter is weaved better than the previous one and it just makes you eager to read more. Keep it up girl! I do love your work.