Good start kinda feels like rick riordan novels though

Good but always heard its better to give more detail

Great piece of work done, the writing is sublime and the story is very good. Keep going author, don't know why you don't have more views though

Really is a great work, the writing is amazing, the world-building is quite something, to say the least as it is very special. You seem to update fairly frequently at that and you can really explain the characters well.

Well first off the explaination of the world background needs to be addressed, and i’d like it if you gave more detail into how characters, backgrounds and objects looked but other than that the writing is pretty great and you update quite consistently ffrom what I can see. So just keep going

Bro sounds like his on some coke😂

Great start, writing is great but confusing at times. Characters are great and a great first chapter.

Writing is great, story and chaacters are good has a lot of potential

Very good read, writing is awesome and the characters are very nice, hope to see more chapters

A great story abouut dungeons, the writing is awesome and the characters are nice. A very good read that deserves some praise

Very good and interesting, the writing is awesome. The mc’s personality is great and overall a very nice read

Very good in terms of writing and (squishing), plot is good so i encourage the writer to continue (girl in cover page)😩

Good start, the writing is amazing and the story for now is living up to it. It’s very good at catching the feelings of the characters. Keep going its got potential.

The mans be crazy for woman, me personally i can never have that, the book is good and the female is interesting but i hope for many love triangles

Very unique to say the least, the mc started quite sad after that break up man. I wonder how there whole relationship will bloom from here im expecting many love triangles

I love the story and the use of gods were very interesting sort of like mine. The writing is fair but the paragraphs are a bit long..

I really like it the mc is very relatable and overall has a very good start

Dont blame me for giving my book 5 stars

Great story i believe the writing is fantastic and the descriptions really help in viualising it. Keep going author.