I'm not dead!
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Well, a new novel I am gonna enjoy reading! I love this chapter, it simply is just a good start!
oh wait theyre talking about the woman LOL mb
Reminds me of B.J. Blazkowicz from The Wolfenstein series kekw
3 Chapters in, like always, and I have much too say about this novel It is absolutely amazing! The way I was able to imagine the location immediately thanks to the descriptions given by the author is immaculate, the way the first action scene is handled is perfection at its finest, just the sheer creativity found in this novel is something anybody would love to see. Although, a major problem I have is with the first chapter, filled with grammatical errors and improper usage of punctuation, so that gets a 4 stars. But other than that, the rest are perfect! TL;DR Give this sci-fi novel a read if you are one that enjoys action and robots!
bro had just woken up and was given such a big task, good luck with that i guess
Grammar had gotten better compared to the previous chapter. Gambare, author!
dude is living his childhood dream!
Although with some mistakes, this first chapter overall is good enough to garner the attention of readers; keep it up, author!