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The_Best_3329a day ago
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Ha I hate this I really hoped he would stick with his decision and stopped giving a f
"That's the thing, I did. It wasn't like he was even subtle. I could tell that he was corrupted with the Light, that Dumbledore was using him to break the prophecy. I did my best not to think about it, but I chose not to do anything. I chose to keep hiding myself, if only a little bit longer. Even if I didn't know that Dumbledore and Grindelwald were planning on blowing up the place, thinking that they'd really stick with their usual subtlety when it came to each task, I willingly let Diggory walk to his death. I could have stopped all of this if I hadn't decided not to run away from the prophecy, not to involve myself in Ragnarök anymore. So many people died, Daphne because I chose to be a coward."
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
書籍·文学 · athass_prkr
The_Best_3329a day ago
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No that would be nothing but famservice and wouldn’t fit in story
AN: This chapter was pretty hard to write, to be honest. I'm not very good at goodbyes, but this is it, Lily is finally gone. I hope I did her character justice. To be honest, I kinda had to make her redemption arc a bit quick since it should have been in the fourth and fifth tasks, and I ended up skipping them to this chapter. I still don't regret my decision with that, since I looked at what I had planned and it felt a bit monotone, but I like to think that this arc would have been a lot better if I didn't have to rush a lot of the character development. Anyway, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
書籍·文学 · athass_prkr
The_Best_3329a day ago
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No
Ch 379 Chapter 379: The Final Parting
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書籍·文学 · athass_prkr
The_Best_3329a day ago
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This novel just has nothing to do with HP anymore
Ch 377 Chapter 377: The Scarlet Angel
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The_Best_3329a day ago
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Tbh i dont belive harry even having a fighting chance you showed him struggle against so many weak individuals that him fighting like this seems unbelievable. At least in my Opinion
AN: This fight scene was very hard to write. Keeping the balance between Grindelwald and Harry's power was pretty delicate and I'm not even sure I pulled it off. Anyway, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
書籍·文学 · athass_prkr
The_Best_33292 days ago
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Fuck me even more action. Did you ever hear about less is more ?
AN: I had this piece of lore planned that the multi-headed dragon (Ladon from Greek Mythology) was actually a creature from the void between worlds (called Typhon), that Kronos tamed, but I couldn't really find a way to add it to the chapter in a way that made sense. Anyway, while they did escape the Labyrinth, there's still a bit of action left (Won't spoil more than that, sorry, but it's a big one). Anyway, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
書籍·文学 · athass_prkr
The_Best_33292 days ago
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I’m so done
The four of them stood frozen as the gate remained open, revealing a gigantic, expressionless face—a familiar one at that. Five voices, one for each Olympian, spoke simultaneously, their voices echoing around the Labyrinth, "We are not done yet with you, Harry Potter!"
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
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The_Best_33292 days ago
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I didn’t like it manly bc the mc seems to not lern his lessons
AN: I'm not sure about this one. I like putting my spin on things, and Greek Mythology is so good at being integrated with other lore, but I don't know if I did a good job at it. Writing the Olympians was pretty hard, but I don't think I made them 'Orderly' enough if that's even a good word to describe them. I rewrote it three times before giving up and just went through with my final draft, asking for your opinion of it in case it didn't come out right. So, as usual, please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
書籍·文学 · athass_prkr
The_Best_33292 days ago
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Man i really want to like this novel but the mc is just so fucking stupid
Ch 371 Chapter 371: Divine Interest
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書籍·文学 · athass_prkr
The_Best_33292 days ago
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Can your mc not be passiv for once in this novel. He basically only reacts to others plots. Even when he just wanted to ignore it
Ch 370 Chapter 370: Malicious Augury
Enchanting Melodies (HP SI)
書籍·文学 · athass_prkr