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Is this like a flash back version of events or something like it the timeline is quite hard to grasp in this chapter

? You just said in another chapter that Feldman had Michal

I really don’t know why every fanfic starts by showing me an interesting part of the story before the beginning. Like it’s telling me it gets interesting later so bare with me rehash the childhood and school life in way to much detail. Then most of em get dropped anyway and the meat one is childhood all over again. Then people stop reading am shit gets dropped. The last part ain’t about this one specifically but the first part was

Ah so the typical god bs

10 since chunin is only really important if he needs to be a teamleader in any way but since they are the first dispatch squad their actual rank isn’t that important

I get that it’s an unfair review but also you could consider it a review of the author 🤔

It’s a multiverse so billions isn’t even fraction

His lowest stat should probably be vit or chakra

First of all why even have him reincarnate if he’s just gonna skip Andre years could have gone into exile for a few years with the same effect. Feels like it’s to nerf him a bit bc he stupidly hid his power. Also I thought he was going to defy destiny by not becoming a villain bc he has a moral compass and conviction. Like taking the doc under him makes him responsible for all the evil things he’s in charge of like if he normally ignored it it would be neutral but now Gavin the power over him everything he ignores is gonna be on him. Ps: this is about the illegal business that he took over.

Well I only skimmed but all of the ones he got seem to be bluff ones like King and that’s just getting old after to many chapters