bigmadtoe
Lv4
2022-05-12 入りましたGlobal
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ライティング
104.9h
読書の
198
本を読む
バッジ
6瞬間
96
bigmadtoe5dコメントLook at this kid switching sides immediately. Smartass! To be fair to him, he and I are barely acquaintances. I'll let this slide, for now.- bigmadtoe12dコメント
get mogged
Mizuki told Iruka, " I think we should let him pass! He has good stamina and decent taijutsu. He even managed to form a clone, despite how pathetic it looks". - bigmadtoe12dコメントAt the end of the grueling long day, Naruto, the blonde-haired demon fox was the only one without the headband.
- bigmadtoe12dコメント
it's fine brudda
I need the reader's opinion on the pacing? Should I slow down or is this pace fine? As for why today's chapter is short- I planned to cover the incidents of the first episode in 3-4 chapters. So, I decided to completely work out seperate incidents rather than putting them all together since it wouldn't be coherent at all. I believe I would probably skim through the canon if I try to pace it faster. - bigmadtoe13dに返信 randomGenoese[A/N: Read some comments... For the umpteenth time guys, follow me on pat reon. You can do so even as a free member. If there are any delays, a delay notice is posted there. If for some reason you can't/don't want to do it, you could just open the site up to see if there are any such notices. So bigmadtoe, you don't need to feel stupid the next time.]
- bigmadtoe13dに返信 NiceReviewerCh 615 Chapter 609 : Orochimaru, The Genius!
- bigmadtoe13dコメント
ok bro
[A/N: Read some comments... For the umpteenth time guys, follow me on pat reon. You can do so even as a free member. If there are any delays, a delay notice is posted there. If for some reason you can't/don't want to do it, you could just open the site up to see if there are any such notices. So bigmadtoe, you don't need to feel stupid the next time.] - bigmadtoe14dコメント
😭😭😭😭
'Mighty respect to Sasuke sama, accept this lowly scum's apology.' - bigmadtoe14dコメント
He asked Sasuke 💀💀💀💀
'What made you think you could come and ask me to teach you a jutsu?', said the boy with red pupils. Of course, who could explain a jutsu better than the greatest prodigy of the generation? - bigmadtoe14dコメントCh 615 Chapter 609 : Orochimaru, The Genius!
- bigmadtoe14dコメントCh 614 Chapter 608 : A Double Bluff!
- bigmadtoe15dコメント
great writing there !
この段落は削除されました。 - bigmadtoe15dコメントCh 3 Transformation(2)-Shen's a pervert?
- bigmadtoe15dコメントCh 614 Chapter 608 : A Double Bluff!
- bigmadtoe16dコメントThis kid, Shen, was born with two consciousnesses in his body. You might ask, how did I know that? These memories and sensations… the signature of my presence was etched on them! This meant that these memories weren't from this body. To add to that, I had no muscle memory regarding the events. They were discreetly mine and of the same metaphysical type as the realm in which those vortexes manifested and I resided post-death.
- bigmadtoe16dコメントCh 2 Transformation Jutsu
- bigmadtoe17dコメントTotal disregard and detachment. Ah! This must be what the monk was referring to. Once you have an out-of-body experience, you can't feel affection or cruelty towards the material world. Honestly, this is incredulous and intimidating at the same time. The shallowness of the emotional spectrum and insignificance of human life could only be felt by those who escape human bounds.
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