Apolonius556

Why the hell do you post 20 chapters and then demand that if they want to read more they have to pay on patreon? --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

It was the first 30 episodes not the first 20, my mistake. Also after that, well you know what I think

Well, here is my review: The first 20 chapters were entertaining to read, the story had a good development, the mc's relationship with the other characters was well explained and understandable, and the story was well written. But (and this is where this story fell flat for me) when the canon characters showed up, that's when everything got screwed up. The super forced relationship that the mc tried to sell as Ron Wesley's mentor was pathetic to say the least, then as you noticed that he was getting to know the other characters it also seemed super forced to me. Why the hell would the mc have to teach Hermione a charm just to keep her out of trouble? The girl is 2 years younger than Mc, just tell her to leave and that's it. Another thing that bothered me a lot was how the third year arc lasted so long, when the first 2 years weren't like that. I understand that it was because of the whole thing about the philosopher's stone and so on, but it really wore me out on all that arc.

Pure spam about another page for you to pay to be able to read. Nefarious..................................................................................................................................................................................

Absolutely nefarious here abandoned this story First of all the Mc is absolutely bland, in the second chapter with 3 YEARS he measures 2 meters and can already transform into his lycan form. Then he barely has a chance he goes with the Starks to follow him by "helping them" by giving him a bite. All this described in the most forced and rapid way as wanting to get it out of the way. Third he says he doesn't owe the Starks anything and then he goes and kisses their ass like a brothel whore. Honestly, this story is disappointing.

Absolutely nefarious here abandoned this story

The story promises a lot at the beginning but as the chapters go by it becomes slow and boring, the domestic MC to a dragon for nothing because the few appearances he has with the dragon are few and absurd. The relationship with the characters is incredibly bland and I don't feel like the MC is important in the story other than winning some tournaments and being "a good gentleman". Without further ado, I was disappointed. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

Hi, thanks for the comment. What happens is that I use a translator to be able to respond to comments and reviews. I understand that it is annoying that the story is not in your native language. I'm so sorry, and thanks for trying.

Thank you very much, the best thing I can recommend is that you can use the google translator, with the option from Spanish to English. I hope it helps you.

Hello! Thanks for commenting, you see, what happens is that English is not my mother tongue, so I wouldn't know how to write the chapters well so that they look as good as possible. I always try that my works have the best possible quality. I do not rule out that it could happen in the future. But with this story it won't happen for now. I tried to do another story in English but like I said, I don't know how it turned out. Sorry for not being able to help you.