Isle_of_MEN

Very good, original, no evident grammar mistake but i can't really judge as English is my third language. Dont bother guessing why its marked under spoiler

The author asked for a 5-star review on this. Being one of the few good fics for the year, I will comply. And I find he word count requirement for reviews stupid.

13 chapters in and things are looking above average. Serious fic with no spot for romance, tis is a a good one brutus . . . . . . . . . . . .

you tease me

Author be teasing us

Compensating you with a review, as you discontinued the other one. Pretty shameless of you to text me to review again after doing it once. Good work though

3 chapters in its good. . . . . . q w e r t y u I o p a s d f g h j k l x c v b n m qwertyuiopasdfghjklzxcvbnm q w e r t y u i o p a s d f g h j k l z x c v b n m

The story is good with an outstanding premise. the length of the chapter is somewhat on the short side (1000-1200 words if I have to estimate) but that is countered by the number of chapters. It's only been a month and 35 chaps are good enough for me. The name of the OC is somewhat questionable, not fitting in the whole Asgardian background, but it will do. All in all, not the best, but one of the better ones out there.

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