CountZemi

I do intend to try and pick it up again when I am not facing imminent homelessness

able to pay rent*****

Sorry I have been going through some IRL stuff, like not being able rent and depression

so being real here for a sec, I just started writing and didn't think it would end up being a thing, so I didn't have a plot outline or anything for the first few chapters. Anyway I first decided for the MC to Ally with monsters because I thought it could be kind of kinky at first, but when I actually sat down and did a plot outline I realized that I had already seeded later conflicts by the goddess being in decline and it would be cool if the MC ended up having to fight large scale conflicts with different religious factions/races and having Mackenzie getting hurt would be a good way for him to start getting used to killing humanoids and taking his first steps into brutality.

also ties into bringing mom back

I thought that it could be funny if he had to store anything purchased from the system later. But I am having him learn space magic to store things for simplicity in the next 'arc'

I wrote out a conversation about how MC was worried about having kids, but he had the system to prevent it, but apparently it wasn't copied/ accidentaly deleted. I will probably rework that section sometime soon since it affects the narrative

he doesn't have either, stuff just exists when he buys it

Hey thanks for the corrections, I am planning on going over the story after getting a little deeper into it, but I will definitely reference your comments when I do. Also I will never not be mad that air gear ended.

the xp curve is exponential, so the MC essentially immediately jumped up 10x his level, if the levels had the same requirements. the exponential xp curve is also why even trained rights get stuck around lvl.20, because you either need ro fight something higher level then yourself or kill like a hundred thousand lower ranked enemies.