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Intense_Gaming_59086 days agoコメントalright, this one is good.
- Intense_Gaming_59086 days ago発表
it is too wholesome and you have given him powerful ability too early and he is not even using it.[not expecting him to conquer ninja world early on ] but with this kind of pacing if you have developed his ability a little slow and reviled it one at a time then it would have been great. well good job.
- Intense_Gaming_59088 days agoに返信 TL_LitnChnotski
what other way do you cross you arms?
- Intense_Gaming_59088 days ago発表
It's a bad fan fiction. Character feels like NPC but the bad version.
- Intense_Gaming_590814 days agoコメント
i am pretty sure danzo would not do that, it kind of out of character.
- Intense_Gaming_5908a month agoコメント
too short,
- Intense_Gaming_5908a month agoに返信 Junkdog
- Intense_Gaming_5908a month agoコメント
i have a question, will we get 2 extra chapter when the power stone reach 400 making total of 3 extra chapter or we get 1 extra chapter making a total of 2 extra chapter.
- Intense_Gaming_5908a month agoコメント
it had a good run. goodbye fanfiction.
- Intense_Gaming_59082 months agoコメント
is it me or the story is starting to get more like other fnfic, not trying to disrespect but i am not enjoining the story as did before time skip. i am just getting this weird vibe.