Kyatus

I didn’t know it was in the pokeball. I thought that it was floating around following out of sight.

I really don’t think that if he has an Elite Alakazam following him that this guy would have ever gotten the chance to even think of touching him.

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Man I forgot that he could mind control people.

I don’t really think so because from what we have seen for him to be really affected it has to be a really strong source of corruption which I feel if someone is able to exploit that without being in danger themselves than he has more to worry about than his flaw.

The concept is decent but some of the characters are so different and OOC that it is weird. Like Itachi is acting like a young master and it is just hard to read.

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You wrote you here when you meant to write he as Izuku is not supposed to know that this is All Might yet.