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Bruh
The number of plot points driven by miscommunication in this story is insane
Hmm. ORV + Leveling with the gods influence is super strong in this chapter. Will keep reading for now. Hopefully it takes its own direction soon.
This made me laugh out loud. tftc!
Nono?
Are you the same author? Just wondering since it doesn’t seem like there are advanced chapters for this here.
I think this could turn out to be a great fic. My two concerns as of the current chapter would be: - Ash seems to be following the plot to the letter in a way that feels unnecessary. It’s still early though, so I’m not too concerned about this changing eventually. - From the way the intro chapters were written, it seems like Ash should have had time to assimilate to the new world prior to starting his journey but he still acts like a bumpkin about everything. (i.e. “I can’t treat this world like the media in my past life”), even about mundane things like a Pokemon center. Shouldn’t he have had time to learn these things in advance? You would think he was Amish or something by his lack of access to information beyond Pallet town.
Should be protosynthesis