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See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

Thank you for pointing out the mistakes. I have fixed as much as I could.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

That will be explained in the next chapter

Thank you. I really appreciate it.

Your concepts are unique but I do have one thing that I think you need to use and that's grammarly. It's a good way of fixing small mistakes. It helped me a lot when I first started writing and hope it helps you too. And I am not saying your English is bad, it's very good but the small mistakes are quite hard to spot and grammarly will help with that.

Thank you.

Thank you for the gift.

Actually that's something that i have already thought about and will add later. It will come soon. Thank you for the comment. I will definitely check out your book too.

Yes, the events that he goes through in the next 40 to 50 chapters will shape him into a bit of an antihero kind of character. Not evil but not good either.