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9/10 men would do the same

not gonna lie thats impressive

bro this generation of family is already "billions" of years old and yet this is considered as ancient, just how many big bangs has this tradition been going for by now

bro the mc is only f grade and is already capable of breaking metal with his bare hands (not considering the curse) now imaging what a sss grade madness emperor level threat can do against a puny tiny planet like ours, we are talking about dragon ball power levels right here, if they fight in a weak space zone all the surrounding planets will get destroyed with the after effects alone so stop trying to apply you weakling logic here.

also if it helps i recommend keeping a list about the book as if it was a race with a starting line, check points you want to reach and a finish line that aligns with the check points and think of the normal chapters like a road that connects everything similar to Mario kart or Forza horizon.

i think you are mistaking their names, Shrek is a chad and donkey f'ed a dragon, at best you are farquaad.

honestly i stopped writing to many comments because you where applying every single one of them and it felt like it wasn't YOU writing the story so choose what direction you want, even if some readers dont like it, you cant keep everyone happy. (its your story so just do what you want)

mah boy was a better option for mc than asta