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honestly it started off chill then it just got cruel like dammmm type or like well that's it i guess or well rip that place or damm you know it's when you see it but it's a really good read but it's just well let's just say i wish the story had more details and more further character development than just getting to the point and leaving because their so much potential in a chapter it could just be more
I would have just taken my chances and run
thats just creepy lowkey
she killed his dad without hesitation for him as a baby who to say she would do the same again to gain what she wants that's a untrustworthy person at the highest degree in my opinion because she started by trying to manipulate the mc for the start of their encounter and that's already a breach of trust and reliability I would just used the gun the same way on Sirius Black because their are already to many fractions including tom
i like this already slithern got all the smoke and mc not following harry like a lost puppy finally some change ot many slithern fanfic
im done im laughing and crying
LOL THAT WAS A GOOD ONE
no i cant stop with this madness
mc a pushover if they where true heros they wouldn’t all be their to clearly pry information about yourself when you clearly dont want to talk about it and at most you could change the story by moving mc to another school with someone almost equal to allmight or even stronger
why does no one like slythern its where all the cool people are at
oh my god he needs help
no he supposed to be tony stark smart or equal
don’t forget he also knows about the children experiments done with senju wood cells who where all orphans and other children around the land of fire small villages is whats crazy about him
also sishu eyes can rewrite the brian
this makea no sense people should know he beaten the nin tails because that nine tails is like 40 meters tall for the whole ninja village to see this is cap
yep yep