The_LastOne_OfThem

am not trying to say it's not good but the beginning kinda feels some how but then you surprised me with the fourth chapter

bro can't you write in 3rd person pov I am stressed reading 1st person pov every time it an ero novel and especially all ur books are 3rd person pov

good novel with potential 🤯but don't u think MC is a little bit too forceful in everything🤌🏻 and the plot is too rushed by the end of the story u won't even have up to 200 chapters which will be disappointing considering the potential that this novel has . have u seen dual cultivation ? no hard feelings 🙇🏻🤗

makes sense but it shouldn't be too long

a unique way to start a novel

character progress is too slow it kill the mood

😏😏😹😹 indeed 🤣

this is so cliche🤌🏻 I have read a lot of novel like dis that it starting to get boring especially the system part 😔