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  • Cevahir_Gezer
    Cevahir_Gezer8 hours ago
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    This is getting incredibly stupid, no one loses galleons. 1.5 million galleons haven't even entered Hogwarts House in 1000 years. People don't lose family heirlooms, incredibly valuable magical tools, no one loses a pensieve as big as a table. You're exaggerating the wealth in the Room of Requirement, he'd be lucky to get 10 galleons out of there. No one ever loses a valuable spell book unless someone puts it there specifically. It would be ridiculous to have incredibly valuable items worth a fortune in the Room of Requirement when the elves are the ones who put lost items there. Unlike canon, if Hogwarts puts the lost items in the Room of Requirement, then logically they can't confiscate the belongings of anyone who is still a student or teacher there. Unless a teacher brought 1.5 million Galleons to Hogwarts and then coincidentally died while the money was in Hogwarts, there wouldn't be that much money in the Room of Requirement. In the HP world, no one walks around with thousands of galleons, there's nothing they can buy at school, there's no point in carrying money around if they're going to buy it from afar via owl post. Really no matter how you think about it, there's a 0% chance those items are there unless someone wants to hide their entire fortune there on the verge of death. Anyone with more intelligence than a monkey would doubt the wealth in there, and it would be stupid not to take the fortune in the room of requirement, which the orphan Voldemort already knew about. There's no way the guy would think of that room as just a place to store things because Tom Riddle is one of the highest intelligences in the history of magic, the guy is an incredible genius, it would be stupid to randomly find a room that turns into whatever he wants and say oh this is a secret hiding place by chance lol.

  • Cevahir_Gezer
    Cevahir_Gezer3 days ago
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    How can he understand "human" language? Because the language of the continent is not found in our world.

  • Cevahir_Gezer
    Cevahir_Gezer4 days ago
    に返信 chadamongmen

    The translation may be good but the novel is really shit. The people in the chat group act in ways that the characters would never act. They all act like stupid Chinese kids with dick brains.

  • Cevahir_Gezer
    Cevahir_Gezer5 days ago
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    The perks he chose are incredibly shitty and the character is really incredibly beta, his potential is so low that he was reincarnated as a pawn of one of the weakest high-class devils (his actual strength is mid-level) Rias Gremory. He's a really slimy brainless MC who is happy to be the lifelong slave of the person who caused his death after being killed by negligence.

  • Cevahir_Gezer
    Cevahir_Gezer10 days ago
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    The logic of chakra working like a muscle is incredibly stupid if chakra levels could increase by that much with training then all root ninjas would have hashirama level chakra levels. no matter how hard mc tries he will never get as much training as a root shinobi those guys get torture level training by the same logic any root shinobi has to have more chakra levels than mc in that case it would be stupid if mc went and got bijuu level chakra while root shinobi got chuninn jonin level chakra. the only thing i can think of to make sense of this is the percentage of mc increasing his chakra levels for example for every time he uses up most of his chakra he gains 0.1% of his current chakra while everyone else gains like 0.0001% in that case not everyone would have crazy chakra reserves innate potential would become more important than training. The whole point of the Senju is that they have a lot of chakra, if you were to make that advantage insignificant to the point where a civilian could easily surpass them, it would be impossible for the Senju to exist on par with the Uchiha for 1000 years. I'm currently on chapter 20, I hope you can rationalize this in the future, and the rationale wouldn't be that people are "lazy", in a hellish world where you can die at any moment, it's not possible for people to be lazy, any child whose parent is a ninja would be forced to train until they pass out from exhaustion. In a world where people are guaranteed to have kage or jonin level chakra, and 95% of what determines strength is chakra, anyone would kill themselves to have that level of chakra. In the ninja world, power is almost entirely determined by the amount of chakra, you may have terrible chakra control, a bad taijutsu form, your skill level may be low, you may be untrained, you may know less than 5 jutsu, you may not know genjutsu, you may use even the jutsu you know inefficiently, but you can be someone at the six path level with an incredibly large amount of chakra, for those who still haven't noticed, the person I'm describing is Naruto. You can be incredibly successful in all of the shinobi's abilities, but if you have genin or chuninn level chakra, you will never be able to defeat any elite jonin, you will not be able to survive for 5 seconds against someone at the kage level.

  • Cevahir_Gezer
    Cevahir_Gezer16 days ago
    に返信 PcaNovels

    Is this a translation?

  • Cevahir_Gezer
    Cevahir_Gezer18 days ago
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    I saw it a few times in the power rankings but it didn't interest me, I confused it with another fic with a similar title that was a Chinese translation. When I got bored, I wanted to read it and without realizing it, I read all the current chapters without looking up. It's really well written, I hope Hinata maintains her gentle and graceful personality. It would be nice if his reincarnation would benefit him. And I think it weakens the character too much. After all, seals can't solve everything. No matter how incredible a seal a chunin uses, even if Kaguya gets caught in this seal on purpose, she can easily escape the seal without even trying. After all, no matter how ingenious your design is, you can't build a tower as tall as the Eiffel Tower out of ordinary mud. I hope his power level is enough to cast a thousand years of death on Kakashi and he's hiding it, lol I hope he casts a thousand years of death on Kakashi. It would be nice if his reincarnation caused a higher affinity in yin release, not too much, at least as much as an average Uchiha Also I think the physical strength level of ninjas is very strange. I mean when we look back sometimes they have the same physical strength as an average civilian and sometimes they go and run around with tons of weight. Then that guy running around with tons of weight can't damage ordinary trees with his fist. They can all be killed with ordinary kunai but then they go and survive crazy jutsus? I think Kishimoto wanted to make ninjas glass cannons in the beginning, in fact they were shown at the level of trained civilians in most of the series. Later when their strength level increased he had a hard time explaining it and decided not to bother explaining it, he left it to the audience to explain how. Anyway, I find the other fanfics you've written quite nice, I hope you continue writing, I look forward to new works from you! Take care, thank you for your good work .