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Spectre_Ouroboros

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  • Spectre_Ouroboros
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    に返信 Umbra_Khan

    I've been preoccupied, but I will update soon, hopefully before next week.

    "It is nice to meet you in person Johnny, and Ben. I am Spectre Ouroboros, the new and improved Oblivion, or for you two or three to better understand what I am, I will explain it like this. I am the living concept and embodiment of matter, antimatter, nothingness, and nonexistence. So, you see, I am not the ruler of the Negative Zone, I AM the Negative Zone."
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    Hate what?

    "It is nice to meet you in person Johnny, and Ben. I am Spectre Ouroboros, the new and improved Oblivion, or for you two or three to better understand what I am, I will explain it like this. I am the living concept and embodiment of matter, antimatter, nothingness, and nonexistence. So, you see, I am not the ruler of the Negative Zone, I AM the Negative Zone."
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    に返信 Minuano

    It's an edited version of Arceus ability from Pokemon Conquest.

    Then I would like an edited version of Arceus' Omnipotence ability from Pokémon Conquest. I know how that sounds but the ability does not grant actual omnipotence it would do this: 'Omnipotent: The user has any abilities from any pokémon media(be it games or otherwise) that they want, adapted how they want for their setting, and any move, damage, ability, etc. will always have their intended effects. For example you can use toxic on Dialga even though he is a steel type, you can hit ghost/intangible beings/beings in Another dimension that only left an image there with a stick or Hyper beam and still damage them, you can use earthquake on flying types, thunder on earth types, etc., You can also see the immediate future, and possess a strong healing factor.' See nowhere near real omnipotence, honestly Giratina's Inescapable Lost Zone is more broken than that ability but moving on.
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    に返信 Wahab_adebanjo

    No he didn't, in the comments below I answered this question, but essentially the Negative Zone is connected to the whole multiverse, not a single universe. So that is not his universe's Reed

    Reed "Smartest Dumbass in the Multiverse" Richards POV:
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    に返信 Wahab_adebanjo

    It's actually not that vexing. Let me explain. Usually, every Abstract has to divide itself into at least one incarnation per universe and also have avatars and champions. Taking Lady Death for example: - 1 incarnation per universe - As many avatars or champions as there are Death Deities and beings she twisted to her favor like Thanos. Even with that, they are usually focusing on many universes at the same time. Spectre, on the other hand, has completely cut himself off from the multiverse through his deal with TOAA and the Living Tribunal. Meaning that unless invited, he is stuck in his own universe. Therefore, focusing on who he knows will be helpful for maintaining balance(The Vishanti, Frigga, Aldrif, etc.) Ensuring they have his best interests and therefore the universe's best interests in mind and empowering them to better act on and keep those interests safe Especially when this is his only personal universe outside his realms is actually logical. Because if the universe is unbalanced and The Living Tribunal erases it, then because of his deal he would technically be stuck in his own realms, at least until a new one is made for him, but he would rather not lose the one he already has, if that makes sense.

    Ch 7 Pride, Prejudice, and Parenting
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    に返信 Wahab_adebanjo

    Thank you and about the realms: In Pokémon Giratina has one realm that is named differently depending on the people referring to it. I liked the names and found similarities with a few dimensions and realms in Marvel. So, I decided to separate the names into each realm or dimension and stick to one name for each. They work like an oreo cookie: Air = Spectre's Main Universe Outer Cookie Top = Mirror Dimenion Inner Cream = Distorted World and Inescapable Lost Zone Outer Cookie Bottom = Negative Zone Plate = Multiverse

    Ch 2 Meeting, Q&A, and Permissions [Edited]
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    に返信 DaoistI6gJSL

    I started breaking up paragraphs and lines as the chapters went on. But if I edit the previous chapters, they will lose the comments on them, which is why these are not well divided, but the Patreon Chapters I can edit freely, so those are well divided now.

    As I groggily open my eyes I can see total darkness, so maybe I didn't open my eyes, no wait I am sure I did hm. After a mental debate on whether my eyes were open or not, I started to feel something. I could feel my body was that of a serpentine dragon with an appearance similar to that of a large legless sauropod. My mouth is now behind the two appendages in front of my face. They open when I wish to open them it seemed, maybe for a dramatic effect when roaring. I have golden horns on my head as well as 3 pairs of gold protrusions that look like external ribs, which cover my grey skin, just pass my head. My inner neck, or the part uncovered by the gold ribs, has four black stripes and 4 red stripes alternating between each other that end on the last pair of gold ribs. I have 6 black wings, coming out of the top of the golden ribs, shaped like tentacles with red thorn-like appendages sticking out at the end of them. I have five rows of golden tipped spikes protruding out of my torso and near the tail. Five gray and red stripes are partially overlapped by these spikes.
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    に返信 Honoured_Writer

    No, I hadn't actually, but I learned about them and started applying them more as the story went on. If I edit the previous chapters, they will lose the comments on them, which is why these are not well divided, but the Patreon Chapters I can edit freely, so those are well divided now.

    As I groggily open my eyes I can see total darkness, so maybe I didn't open my eyes, no wait I am sure I did hm. After a mental debate on whether my eyes were open or not, I started to feel something. I could feel my body was that of a serpentine dragon with an appearance similar to that of a large legless sauropod. My mouth is now behind the two appendages in front of my face. They open when I wish to open them it seemed, maybe for a dramatic effect when roaring. I have golden horns on my head as well as 3 pairs of gold protrusions that look like external ribs, which cover my grey skin, just pass my head. My inner neck, or the part uncovered by the gold ribs, has four black stripes and 4 red stripes alternating between each other that end on the last pair of gold ribs. I have 6 black wings, coming out of the top of the golden ribs, shaped like tentacles with red thorn-like appendages sticking out at the end of them. I have five rows of golden tipped spikes protruding out of my torso and near the tail. Five gray and red stripes are partially overlapped by these spikes.
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  • Spectre_Ouroboros
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    に返信 killua32829

    It was alright. Some circumstances made it more problematic, and focusing became harder, causing me to stop posting temporarily. However, it was relatively more annoying after those circumstances.

    Ch 32 The Room, All-Speak, and A Game! [Edited]
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    に返信 killua32829

    That doesn't bug me at all, I actually really appreciate people providing feedback. What I don't appreciate and heavily counter is when someone is whining all the time, without providing feedback or simply spreading misinformation like someone did in the reviews at one point. Anyway, I appreciate the comment about having more experimentation with his abilities, and will keep that in mind for future chapters, as I am sort of doing a similar thing for Aldrif, so in a way everything she is learning he by default can learn and do as well... Sorry, I went on a tangent again, but still, I will keep the feedback in mind.

    Ch 26 Clone, APM, Changes 1/2
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    に返信 killua32829

    Thank you for the comment, and if you figure out what was rubbing you the wrong way, do feel free to point it out. However, concerning him not having total knowledge about things that are related to him aside from the "I don't want to know for fun" excuse, it is also based on us authors and our own limitations. For example the original Oblivion existed before the multiverse was even created, however it wasn't until the 6th or 7th multiverse(can't remember which) that he couldn't help his loneliness and created a daughter, which doesn't make sense as he could have done it before. Taking that even further, him sparring Bobby's life because he taught him emotions and feelings makes absolutely no sense. After all, a being who lived through so many multiverses really never experienced emotions? Lies he clearly knows hatred, maybe it is referring specifically to love, loneliness, and similar feelings, but he HAD to wait until Bobby taught him to spare his life in the whatever iteration of the multiverse? The Living Tribunal is also another similar character he is supposed to be omniscient, but can be reasoned with, and convinced to change his decisions. Whereas an omniscient would have no need for that in his case. After all, he is not God looking out for his children he is a cosmic judge, jury, and executioner he is supposed to know what the best course of action is and follow it, not listen to Dr Strange and the like and change his decisions, etc. Another point back to Oblivion is the Chaos King. If that is what an Avatar can do, imagine what the OG Oblivion could do if he took the same path. If he really wanted to erase all of existence to return to his peaceful void, then he could simply do that. After all, I don't really think many beings are actually able to match him. Also, apparently, Mistress Death has used the Infinity Well seeking knowledge. Anyway, the point of all of this, if you are still reading this way longer than necessary reply, is that Abstracts don't know everything because authors don't know everything, and we get more creative as we write. That and they can also learn and grow, as we see with different Abstracts in the comics, I hope this doesn't discourage you from continuing the novel though.😅

    Ch 26 Clone, APM, Changes 1/2
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    に返信 Creciplbytwjub

    Yes, I will. I just had some trouble and had to stop for a while. The next chapter should be out before Saturday.

    Ch 34 Imperceptibility, Judges, and MUD!
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    に返信 Pink_Madara

    🤣 Normally, yes, but with the APM ability TOAA granted Spectre and what he embodies, there really are only maybe at most 3 beings that could challenge him.

    After that-" Noticing how Odin was completely ignoring me and probably planning on messing with my plans I decided I had enough. "Alright I cannot deal with young, dumb Odin. Frigga, you are in charge of him and Asgard. Do not worry, with my blessing granting you a connection to this realm, all its energy and magic, you being mostly a magician yourself are officially the second strongest in the Norse Pantheon. The first being your daughter Aldrif, so any problem he could try to create to mess with our plans for a better Asgard just magic them away, or send them to the Mirror Dimension, it is impossible to escape without my blessing, permission or more power than me, and to my knowledge there is only one being stronger than myself in the multiverse, so yeah, no problems on that part."
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    に返信 Creciplbytwjub

    POSSIBLE SPOILERS: Yes and No, so I am referring to The One Below All, who is technically a part of TOAA, but not at the same time.

    Ch 14 Nature, Lesson, and Warning
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    に返信 killua32829

    He is a singularity. The other version he is referring to, is the OG Giratina against Dialga and Palkia.

    Smirking visibly, I answered "Yes, it is, only omnipotent beings have a slim chance of escaping. I should know as a variant of myself, in a fit of pure rage, trapped another multiverse's equivalent of Infinity and Eternity in it, and they were powerless to escape once trapped."
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    に返信 Alpha_YandereKun

    I tried screen shoting it and posting it, but it is not letting me like it, so it is probably not visible either, I will try to find a solution tomorrow. Thanks for bringing it up.😅

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    に返信 Alpha_YandereKun

    I just reposted it. Let me know if you can't see it.

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    に返信 The_Lazy_Slime

    Sorry, I had IRL problems come up, but the next chapter should be out before Saturday.

    Ch 34 Imperceptibility, Judges, and MUD!
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    に返信 BigBud

    There is no need to cry and throw a tantrum. If I knew I was correcting a toddler, I would have tried to be even nicer, but oh well, mistakes were made. All I did was offer advice for criticism and correct your misinformation. If you can't handle criticism and correction, don't criticize in the first place.

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    に返信 BigBud

    Now that how to write a real, quote on quote, negative review is out of the way let's get back to how you clearly do not seem to understand what you are reading: SPOILERS: #1 TOAA NEEDED a replacement Oblivion, the MC was the best fit, with the alterations the void made to his soul. #2 The only minor problem(which is actually not minor), that the mc solves are in another universe. Within his universe, everything he does has significance, especially since he is literally given responsibility over the balance of his universe, Skrull genocide, is a mayor thing. The only asgardian he beats up, and for very good reason if you know anything about young Odin, is Odin, (Writing this I realized I could have done a much better job in introducing him, his backstory, and what he has done, to garner the MC's initial disdain, see that is how you are supposed to feedback on a negative review). Aside from Odin, no Asgardian is harmed by the MC, in any case he is helping them. Making fun of Reed, are you a fan of his, because otherwise, you would know that is the least he deserves. Again another one that could have been better introduced and explained, though I do so in the comments. #3 The mentality of a 13 year old..., seriously. So you are telling me, that between being an overbearing dictator, and having childlike wonder the instant you receive nigh infinite power, you would have neither? Well the MC has a little of both, and if not using curse words is why you are saying he has the mentality of a 13 year old, then tell me, what being of great power needs to use curse words to get their point across? Other than weak ones. Half the novel is dialogue, not him praising himself, get it right, though again a normal person would have a power high, anyone who denies that is illogical, and praising himself is a part of that, he is still getting used to it. #4 He is not acting like Giratina or a 13 year old, he is acting like an immature, and inexperienced universal ruler, No normal 13 year old, would genocide a civilization with balance in mind, nor have no regrets, except for some minor inconvenience brought by it either. As he grows, and gains experience he will develop a more appropriate personality, and actions, the story is still going, I only stopped momentarily for other reasons outside of my control. #5 And finally if it was really as bad as you say it was, I can't believe you had to sacrifice yourself reading it to the end, word of advice, if you do not like something, nobody is forcing you to read it, and on top of that leaving such a bad review, at least do it right.

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