CGiverny
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Writer of fantasy and sci-fi. Also love reading lots of books!!
2022-03-28 入りましたGlobal
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I love how supportive the dad is
Her father approached her,kneeled down to reach her height,then hugged her tightly whispering to her ear,"Don't tell your mom or else you'll never go to that school ever again.Go kick their butts girl". - CGiverny1yrコメント
the should be they
It had been 13 years after being born.On top of a the roof of a mansion,she sat at the edge gazing at the magnificent city.The buildings were very high with flying cars all over the air.At a time like this,there was no wheeled car.The place was very busy and noisy as people walked here and there while machines advertised items.One thing was clear to her,the city was security tight as soldiers were all over.The uniform the wore made them look like golden robots.Their guns seemed very weird as it was huge and had no bullet muzzle.Just three hooks that stretched forward then bent towards the centre.Shiku had never seen them on use. - CGiverny1yrコメントCh 1 FORCED TO REINCARNATE
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cause should be course
Memories of her fallen team rushed in her brain as she sucked the milk very fast with anger.Of cause she remembered every thing.Even the last moments of her head.This made her stop sucking as she was full of baby anger.With all the adrenaline rush,she got tired and fell asleep. - CGiverny1yrコメントJust after thinking of reincarnation,the orb became brighter and brighter that it would even blind a normal person.She felt like her consciousness was being sucked by the thing until nothing was left of her.
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Should probably changed this part a little. Sounds weird the way it's written
Shiku,had no problem slicing her betrayers.She killed one after another with her large white sword.But suddenly, through her back to her chest,a black sword appeared between her breasts.With all the strength that she could summon under all the pain,she slapped the tip of the sword with her bare hands forcing it retreat back.She turned around swinging her blade towards her rival but due to the sharp pain in her chest,she was slow.The huge muscular figure moved out of the line of attack laughing. - CGiverny1yrコメント
sounds like a cool mom
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Grammar is a little weird but the story looks good so far
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...What?
He thinks with just his dick and fucks every girl he sets his eyes on not caring about the age from underage girls to overage grandma. - CGiverny1yrコメント
so many views but only two people read it🤔
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That's a lot of books
Damien said losing his patience he had read almost every single novel present on the internet and after reading them he couldn't wait to read more of them. - CGiverny1yrに返信 GG_Slayer
I see
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Great world-building so far
Growing up in Eagle Trail Town, Han Cai had seen the dangers of this world firsthand. The country Han Cai was born in was called Yin country. Life for the poor citizens of Yin country was a constant struggle. The harsh and unforgiving climate of the region, characterized by long, cold winters and short, cool summers, makes it difficult for them to grow crops and raise livestock. Many of these citizens lived in small, isolated villages scattered throughout the countryside, where they subsist on a diet of meager grains and root vegetables. - CGiverny1yrコメント
Don't make promises you're going to break lol
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