CGiverny

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Writer of fantasy and sci-fi. Also love reading lots of books!!

2022-03-28 入りましたGlobal

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CGiverny2 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
Ch 1 DISCLAIMER
Saintess? Not Anymore! I'd Rather be a Destroyer
ファンタジー · OnikunStudios
CGiverny2 years ago
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Ch 1 DISCLAIMER
Saintess? Not Anymore! I'd Rather be a Destroyer
ファンタジー · OnikunStudios
CGiverny2 years ago
発表
Really interesting story. It has a lot of potential and the characters look good. Hopefully the author will improve their skills to write a better story Hint: work on grammar and your narrating skills
RETURN OF THE ANGEL QUEEN
アニメ·コミックス · GGL_manga
CGiverny2 years ago
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I love how supportive the dad is
Her father approached her,kneeled down to reach her height,then hugged her tightly whispering to her ear,"Don't tell your mom or else you'll never go to that school ever again.Go kick their butts girl".
RETURN OF THE ANGEL QUEEN
アニメ·コミックス · GGL_manga
CGiverny2 years ago
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the should be they
It had been 13 years after being born.On top of a the roof of a mansion,she sat at the edge gazing at the magnificent city.The buildings were very high with flying cars all over the air.At a time like this,there was no wheeled car.The place was very busy and noisy as people walked here and there while machines advertised items.One thing was clear to her,the city was security tight as soldiers were all over.The uniform the wore made them look like golden robots.Their guns seemed very weird as it was huge and had no bullet muzzle.Just three hooks that stretched forward then bent towards the centre.Shiku had never seen them on use.
RETURN OF THE ANGEL QUEEN
アニメ·コミックス · GGL_manga
CGiverny2 years ago
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Really great start
Ch 1 FORCED TO REINCARNATE
RETURN OF THE ANGEL QUEEN
アニメ·コミックス · GGL_manga
CGiverny2 years ago
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cause should be course
Memories of her fallen team rushed in her brain as she sucked the milk very fast with anger.Of cause she remembered every thing.Even the last moments of her head.This made her stop sucking as she was full of baby anger.With all the adrenaline rush,she got tired and fell asleep.
RETURN OF THE ANGEL QUEEN
アニメ·コミックス · GGL_manga
CGiverny2 years ago
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Just after thinking of reincarnation,the orb became brighter and brighter that it would even blind a normal person.She felt like her consciousness was being sucked by the thing until nothing was left of her.
RETURN OF THE ANGEL QUEEN
アニメ·コミックス · GGL_manga
CGiverny2 years ago
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Should probably changed this part a little. Sounds weird the way it's written
Shiku,had no problem slicing her betrayers.She killed one after another with her large white sword.But suddenly, through her back to her chest,a black sword appeared between her breasts.With all the strength that she could summon under all the pain,she slapped the tip of the sword with her bare hands forcing it retreat back.She turned around swinging her blade towards her rival but due to the sharp pain in her chest,she was slow.The huge muscular figure moved out of the line of attack laughing.
RETURN OF THE ANGEL QUEEN
アニメ·コミックス · GGL_manga
CGiverny2 years ago
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sounds like a cool mom
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