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Shanmay3hコメントThat was awesome, really!
| Author's Ending Note: So, I finished the possible romance introduction AND gave the main character a bit of character development for starters. Now, this chapter was smaller because I wanted to finish this small topic before dwelling on the more interesting and serious stuff. The next chapter is coming out tomorrow, or sooner, and we shall see some action, I hope. |- Shanmay3hコメント
Oh I love this
My eyes wandered, tracing every line of his face as a way to not forget him any time soon, as both of our breaths 'collided' in front of our faces. "Relax," I hushed him in a loving tone of voice, joining my forehead with his for a brief moment, ",– everything will be alright, baby~." To seal my goodbye, I planted a small kiss on his lips, which seemed to make his mind rest easy, judging by the serene look that his expression turned to. - Shanmay1dコメント
Frankenstein is a scientist, who created Frankenstein’s monster. Frankestein’s creator is his mother and I doubt that you would rather look like a girl.
"Frankenstein? Do I look like a monster? Let's be for real. I am probably Frankenstein's creator, and you came looking for me." Joe countered with a meaningful smirk. - Shanmay1d発表
Unlike many other ffs on MHA, which are of extremely low quality (basically just harem, sex scenes, and power show off with no personality whatsoever), this one actually has very good points: 1 Firstly, language. It’s VERY good: dialogues look alive, some interesting phrases and terminology here and there, enough description but not too much so you won’t forget the whole point before finishing reading the way a tree looks (“War and peace” of Tolstoy gave me a trauma) 2 Secondly, nice pacing. Nothing to say here. 3 Thirdly, interesting story points. MC IS overpowered but he has a glaring weakness - he is still a kid, a teenager. Also, the whole background of a character is really down to earth, to some degree, and feels ✨relatable✨. 4? I find it interesting that there is a representation of gay(MC IS NOT GAY, at least as far as the story goes) ppl, especially on this site since a lot of readers really dislike seeing gay content here(I still remember that there was a ff, which narrated about femboy, in a weekly top with a tag “yaoi”). Overall, I hope that author will continue this work. Because I am in dire need of some good ffs about MHA.
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Welcome to my candy store
They walked side by side, Oliver slightly leading the way into the building. Ochaco was chatting away with Oliver. Izuku wanted to strike up a conversation, too, but his eyes kept wandering back to Oliver's tattoos. Now that he could get a better look, the tattoos were beautifully done—clean line work, all in black or red ink. As Oliver swayed his arms, Izuku noticed there were words in the palm of his hand. Izuku's English was still a bit spotty, but was that the word [STORE] on his left palm? - Shanmay1dコメント
Bit
The boy looked at Izuku for a beat longer, as if he wanted to say more, but his attention was quickly pulled by someone Izuku hadn't even noticed. A brown-haired girl bundled up under a coat and pink scarf. She had her hand extended towards Izuku, and her eyes were widened in what appeared to be surprise. - Shanmay2dコメント
So I assume that death promised Harry from another universe “to bring his loved one and him back together” but for a price of slaying a Merlin’s descendant and the main character of this world..?
Orion just let it go and close his eyes. - Shanmay3dコメント
More realistic would be something like “herach ego” “Herach” is basically a verb that is made from a noun “h-er” which basically means dick, and it means to kill or to punch someone.
General Volkov had taken cover behind an overturned oak desk. "Ubey ego!" he roared. Kill him! - Shanmay4dコメント
Chinese impostor in Japan
"I'm just getting rid of a filthy pig, nothing else," Akari said coolly. - Shanmay4dコメント
That is an amazing start! I’ll read your other novel as well. Your pacing and writing seems really good! Gj👍
A/N- hope you like it and for new readers reading my book , you will understand the first chapter if you read my other book - Shanmay5dコメント
Allow me to introduce myself Actually 🤓 Since in the number code #ZYA01 decimals digits are present we can say that this digit alphabet is 10+26 digits long Hence Z represents number 35, Y represents 34, and A stands for 10 The correct number would be 35341001 but even then it is not properly transferred into a decimal The correct way to do so would be 35*36^4 + 34*36^3 + 10*36^2 + 1 🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓
He said, "The number suggests that I'm the only participant or maybe the first. But the alphabets, seeing that they are in a descending order, must also mean numbers, though I don't know what they signify. I can guess that Z means 26, Y means 25, and A means 01. So, I suppose that means whatever the first part indicates, it means I'm 262501st." - Shanmay5dコメントTo his horror, it did. A skull stared back at him from the murky water, its eye sockets flickering with blue flames.
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Is it that you realised after 5 chapters that you didn’t describe his appearance so you decided to do it now 🤣
Indra ran a hand through his thick, dark hair, his sharp features set in concentration. At 6'2" with an athletic build, he cut an imposing figure even amid the chaos of an alien invasion. His olive skin was sheened with sweat, and his deep raven eyes glinted with determination. - Shanmay5dに返信 007yaboiSorry for the lateness, I know you guys don't like how hades acted last chapter along with how he treated Angela so I've been editing my future to try and fix that as I also realize that it's kinda mean.
- Shanmay7dに返信 Ashborn1609
It’s decent. Personally, it’s easier than art(it just wasn’t really my passion)
... Well, more than enduring it, it would be more correct to say that I just forced myself to simply not tell my parents that I wanted to stop. That way, I was forced to keep going, and therefore, I became forced to simply accept the training and adapt to it. - Shanmay8dに返信 OverlordBGs
Bro is majestic af
The man's skin was a swarthy color usually reserved for the inhabitants of Dorne. His long snow-white hair fluttered in the remnants of the breeze blowing through the cave, and a small braid hung down the left side of his chest. A black and scarlet colored cloak, secured by ties to his shoulders, moved in time with his hair. His black and white shirt had inserts embroidered in gold. On his tattooed hands and fingers with black painted nails, gold rings shone. In one hand he held a golden staff with an upside-down lamp-shaped tip. His skirt of the same color as his shirt, more like a dress, was secured by a braided scarlet sash, and his tail hung down the front. - Shanmay8dコメント
Good luck!
Next week I will not publish anything, I have exams. - Shanmay9dコメント
“Aloud in his head” I get the idea but any philologist would kill you
"Withdraw," Kai said aloud in his head as a finger appeared before him. - Shanmay11dコメント
This happened in September I AM THE ONE WHO KILLED THEM ALL
~Do you remember?~ - Shanmay11dコメント
Is this a time loop? What if it was him, who sent him into the past? Like infinite loop untill success?
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