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MisterEnd0821

MisterEnd0821

Lv2

Just a veteran writer who writes with amazing twists of lores.

2022-03-08 入りましたPhilippines
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7h

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110

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5

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    コメント

    Well written first chapter. I commend you for that fellow author

    Ch 1 Beginning
    Announcement Hall
    東方 · deshper
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    発表

    I love how well-written the author did towards the story. I may have understand it a little but it shares a potential to make it romantic in the soon future when I read this. I sure hope that you prosper towards this masterpiece you made. Off I go, Anna

    The Art Collector and His Billionaire Lover
    都市 · Anna Baibe
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    コメント

    Hey Anna I am here to read it now. Be sure to repay a favour haha.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: At A Glance
    The Art Collector and His Billionaire Lover
    都市 · Anna Baibe
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    I love how it turned out actually. The writing quality is superb and the characters are well-defined. I'll definitely looking forward to read this. Byeee

    Forbidden Mates
    ファンタジー · Anna Baibe
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    I only read the prologue so far but I know something will be interesting the more I read them. It has this vibe that you want to know more just by expressing on how they move and gesture. The World Background is good and the writing quality is great. I do hope the writer will make more chapters in order for me to understand and get away from the real world just by reading and imagining and pretending I'm the protagonist. Nice job!

    Summoned To Another World As Heroes But We'll Be Lords Of Calamity!
    ファンタジー · Jayetheus
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    発表

    I love how it turned out. A classic hard working girl trying to help her own family. I surely would love to see her be with a man that deserves her. Nice work Fellow Novelist!!!

    CEO's Contract Obsession
    都市 · Shiroi_Nami
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    コメント

    I love the first chapter. Keep it up

    Ch 1 Amelia Bell
    CEO's Contract Obsession
    都市 · Shiroi_Nami
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    発表

    From what I've read so far from chapter 1, I have to say it is a well written story. But small mistakes from those details derailed me from focusing. Like first you should fix whether it is first person pov or second person pov. And the first words from the paragraphs has lowered cases, try not to repeat this habit. But so far the writing quality and the world background is superb. The story is great and I do hope you learned more enough for me to take some samples of your writing quality. Good Job 👍

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    That's a well written chapter.

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    Your essay or Their essay?

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    Add a apostrophe in this statement if this is what Y/N said

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    Capitalized at the beginning

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    Never put first person pov and second person pov together, just put Y/N.

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    コメント

    Also this, you should choose whether it is a first person or second person pov

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    コメント

    You should add some prepositions like as or whereas like that at the start of this paragraph. I just don't tend to put lowercase at beginning of the paragraph.

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
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    Uhmmm the 9th and 10th paragraph is the same. Remove it at once

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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    発表

    Shameless author here, just gonna rate my story. About how the potential of my story foretells, it has the fantasy of meeting ones' imagination. Characters from the story merges and jumps to the land of the gods if they may say. Hoping I could get more positive reviews and soon this story will flourish one day. Thanks for reading!

    Welcome to Author's World
    アニメ·コミックス · MisterEnd0821
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    に返信 SolomonCliff

    I like your review dude

    Welcome to Author's World
    アニメ·コミックス · MisterEnd0821
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    発表

    I love how it turned out, a classic dungeons and dragons. I love how the vibe of the story makes a RPG game. The writing quality was clean and the world background is magnificent. Hopefully, the author would write more chapters and less than 1500 words so that the reader would read it just fine. For now this is my rating. Good luck fellow novelist!

    All of the End
    ファンタジー · SolomonCliff
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  • MisterEnd0821
    MisterEnd08211yr
    発表

    I'll give the author 5 stars since this is a review swap. Hopefully the author would correct her grammar and all but the story is well-described. The world background is great and the story development is stable enough to come through. hopefully the author works hard for it. Anyways bye bye.

    Depth and power of love
    ファンタジー · Lovebird_01
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