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Too many problems for me to write, but the deal breaker for me is his so-called cheat or original ability time void that lets his body do whatever he says as his mind goes to the void, just A stupid way to do time skips, and takes away all the time for character growth. Unless the author makes Mc immortal then he'll spend most of his life with his mind in the void witch is stupid for a fan-fic especially with how he avoids the original story worried about changing it but the hunter x hunter anime only covers a very tiny part of the world so its stupid to avoid it just for the future that may or may not change

Several things have already changed compared to the original. Our mc should stop acting like what happened there will happen again. Otherwise, it means all his efforts mean nothing and the original will just play out again.

How are demons, angels, and gods not hp material? They are inherently mysterious, mythical, and magical creatures. So, for them to be part of a magical world makes complete sense. Though I can understand if it may not be to your taste due to the difference in times with the original

It's a world of magic why should it be boring and predictable with just a Lord Voldemort as a bad guy, and only 1 way of staving off death. I personally love the originality of this instead of most fanfics that keep it uncomplicated as you call it and basically rewrite the original with like only 2 or 3 differences

Read the rest of it and I think you'll change your mind

A wonderful story you can truly fall into. I only wish it was already complete as in my opinion it is best read without long breaks to immerse yourself fully into the story. Looking forward to the rest of it author.

Always up for an Ace of Diamond fanfic