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I’ll be honest, this fanfic is good but did it not test my patience our bill cipher was slowly improving on his or her own and it took time, but she or he was getting there, but the Pines family got in that basically trying to change her or him into what they believe is good I was furious and I could barely read one chapter without skipping to the next, hoping that she would finally leave them or kill them because I don’t feel like they were helping only causing pain and she or he already suffered enough pain and they already have to deal with the bullshit in the home dimension so this is honestly so wrong I get why they do things I do but it just makes me furious that she didn’t have two she could’ve stayed with her brother and just ignore them, and if they try to do bullshit with her, she would shut them up and be like I don’t use my patience is the only reason I didn’t do anything right now is because I love and respect my brother [img=angry][img=angry]

I’m getting angry with every chapter Bill and his sister need help need genuine healing. They need someone who would actually listen to them and help them throughout their problem. But all they are doing is trying to force them to become this perfect being in their eyes on the closest thing too which is f honestly they need help. They’re not good people, but it’s not completely their fault they suffered the mind is not okay I don’t feel like they’re helping I feel they’re making it worse. I feel that they should’ve came out of this stronger but with them they’re coming out of this weaker and I hate it, especially considering who they are as people or beings they need to be strong oh people like time baby will take advantage of them

I’m not sure I think it’s the third or second chapter

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How stupid can you guys be? What he did was perfectly logical. Because this is not a transmigrated it’s a rebirth can you build a life family not only that but he only had three days and he managed to get a lot of things in case basically be prepared as best as he could go to an island a prison, or whatever, he only had three days. How was he supposed to get there and if it’s a present there is a lot of criminals in there what is he supposed to do fight them with a shotgun? Honestly ridiculous don’t comment if you don’t know what you’re doing or saying this is honestly ridiculous and annoying because I actually like the story if you ignore certain things like the cough cough you know I mean seriously, it’s barely 14 man at least make him older like to know me by 16 or 17 this honestly makes me curious like a boy is the age, you know I don’t wanna say it’s not just because you know but because it’s kind of makes me uncomfortable whenever I’m getting off topic that’s all thank you

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I love this story, but there’s a problem. I wish that you take out the Haram. I don’t really like her aunt and I love the ship, between him and the first girl SIF I feel like from SIF, actual character from the movies, and the stories, it feels like she wouldn’t want to share him and the OC it feels like he loves SIF and no girls is really in his mind other than her so you can see glimpses here and there, but I feel like he should stay with SIF. Only her and the other characters can be like no part of the family, but they’re not his lover. I don’t know, I just hate it I hate the Haram, the story in a bit self is good, but I feel like it’s ruining it. I know it’s a lot to ask but can you please please take out the Haram I really love the story I really do but the home is giving me the Grinch and every time it’s mention in the story you know like on the silly mentioned about anyway, that you see that all they really want him and they were like oh I’m gonna have no matter what and they’re like okay like I don’t mind sharing in stuff just not good, I hate it. I’m glad that the story does not focus necessarily on romance and instead it’s about the development which makes the story amazing by the way, but please take out the Haram trust me and said I don’t to make it so the girls and said both of his I don’t know like pantheon and family like sisters or something it would be much better if you ask me I’m sorry I’m babbling it is that I love the story so much and I love the OC it’s just not doing it for me please please take it out and I’m sorry if I wrote a few things wrong English is not my first language

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