Juan_Garay_0225

a shitty nerf for a stupid, shitty MC...

You know that any Viltrumite is already prowling harder than the continental level, right? The shitty punches and all that won't do anything to them, just tickle them...

The MC is cringeworthy, he should stop acting like Gojo, he just cosplays like an idiot, he's not one, let him be his own person with his own personality...

It doesn't bother me, what bothers me is that in each chapter at least a third of the chapter is only in reference to that and so the story doesn't advance at all xd

The novel is good and entertaining, really, but there comes a time when it's annoying that they always comment on real-life NBA players and are comparing them all the time. It's annoying because if it were just once in a while, but no, please make it stop for a bit.

If you're not going to write r18 that's fine, but then don't post moaning, it's just annoying and unnecessary shit.

You know that DXD takes place in the years 2007 and older, right?

Bullying the girl he likes is a good technique from an idiot hahaha

I'm not just saying this because of the action, but because the dialogues feel totally empty and emotionless, and the relationships between the characters and the MC too, but anyway, I'm going to keep reading to see what it's like.

So far the only interesting chapter was this one about the work, after that everything else seemed boring to me but oh well let's see how this goes