Luizz_Ricardo

Author, you are exaggerating with the comments and the comedy, you are making the fanfic silly and without any weight, 1 chapter focused on comedy is good but if every chapter is like that it won't even be funny

Thanks for the chapter, author, jokes are good but you have to know how to measure the amount, in massacre scenes it's better to make the scene tense and dramatic to have more impact on the story, too many jokes break the immersion

finally someone made a cool and funny reincarnation, I'm going to follow this fic, the author has potential

author don't change the dragon, if you make the dragon turn into a girl it will end the story

Just be a little realistic

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Hi friend, how are you? When answering you, you need to remember that he ate the fruit of the wood/forest that merged with his chakra and suffered a mutation. Mutations are common in Naruto. The Sharingan is a mutation along with the Rinnegan.

Being honest, the fanfic has no flaws, but what I don't like is its character construction. The protagonist has the limit breaker and chooses the Yamanaka clan, making his path to power difficult for nothing. He just had to choose the Senju or Uchiha clan and have a good amount of time to train, proto superkage level. I also don't like the magician or mental type construction, I find it annoying and crazy.

The story is good, the author has a lot of knowledge about the world of Naruto and respects its rules and standards, many Naruto fanfic authors don't know anything about the functions of chakra, my only criticism is that the dialogues could be better worked and detailed, as well as the space where the MC is located could also be more detailed because this enriches the story.

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