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At_Tyagi

At_Tyagi

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2022-02-11 入りましたGlobal
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  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
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  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
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    Simp no meaning to goals and early bs repeatedly realising i will become stronger in each chapter [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
    コメント

    Even after dieing and coming back he's acting childish like yelling to cheer himself or MP joke -_-😞 another one zzz

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
    発表

    Hmm well he knows English and can write but the story is like he wants sex for system points goes out 2random girls take him to a hotel and have sex no scenes in that too only "u know how it went" (supposedly system has charm aura everyone acts like they have never seen a man i mean they have father brothers friends outside the academy still even freshers who were outside some time ago stare at him... He has 6points charm zzzz still -_- .... ) Good way of writing but non descriptive and non realistic interactions

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
    に返信 sawwon

    What will the fights be like any so called totem power?

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
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    Copy my MCV in the doomsday and some more novels to make this noobie novel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
    発表

    Had high hopes for this second novel but honestly disappointing start has soo much filler and holes it got annoying and with the MCs character ahh anyway maybe I'll come again later and review after new chapters are released but for now it's bad more like he's out of ideas 😅

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
    コメント

    Literally chapters worth of filler -_- dropping ... I really had High Hopes after armipotent but not anymore

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
    に返信 Mysticfudge77

    Exactly and then 2-3 chapters for this looks soo forced ahh

  • At_Tyagi
    At_Tyagi2 years ago
    コメント

    HOW ARE THE ARCHERS SOO ACCURATE ?