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EthanRosenberg11hに返信 MyMumCallsMePigCh 12 Chapter 9: Wreathed in Red- EthanRosenberg1dに返信 EthanRosenberg
In simpler terms, don't take it to heart.😅
The ground was littered with the bodies of the fallen shinobi. - EthanRosenberg1dに返信 MyMumCallsMePig
No need to fret over little things bro. I was just saying that, so you can improve you're writing skills.
The ground was littered with the bodies of the fallen shinobi. - EthanRosenberg2dコメント
I think you should've said the ground was littered with the body parts of the fallen shinobi. Because be real after getting into Sukuna's domain, it's impossible to be left intact.
The ground was littered with the bodies of the fallen shinobi. - EthanRosenberg2dコメントCh 12 Chapter 9: Wreathed in Red
- EthanRosenberg3dコメント
Cool, this is what I've been waiting for.
"They....the 600 shinobi that were stationed on the border just in case we might need to invade and also secure Naruto Uzumaki...they...they are all dead." - EthanRosenberg10dに返信 SHCH7Ch 8 Chapter 6: Rains of Castamere III
- EthanRosenberg11dに返信 SHCH7Ch 8 Chapter 6: Rains of Castamere III
- EthanRosenberg11dコメント
The chapter was good. But I felt that MC would cut the villain in half with his cleave just like Sukuna. But it looks like we have to wait for it. Anyway the chapter was good, and I hope you have some sort of outline and know where things are heading.
Ch 8 Chapter 6: Rains of Castamere III - EthanRosenberg12dに返信 MyMumCallsMePigCh 6 Chapter 4: Rains of Castamere II
- EthanRosenberg13dに返信 Hyuga_Tobirama
And he can also have a army of children too right 😆😆. Just kidding. But I am really curious about the romance root, since he really love his wife.
The first light of dawn filtered through the wooden shutters of the Namikaze household, casting a soft glow on the tatami mat flooring. Birds chirped outside, their songs a gentle prelude to the day's festivities. Naruto, a boy of five with an old soul and a sharp mind, stood in his room, struggling to don the traditional robes that lay before him. The rich fabric felt foreign against his skin, the intricate design befitting the son of the Hokage and the future leader of the Uzumaki clan—a clan that, in reality, no longer existed. - EthanRosenberg13dコメントCh 2 Author Notes and Spoiler