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did u understand what the guy meant
I think your dead brain just can't understand the real meaning of the sentence
Oi stop sending things about demon earth art novel it’s annoying
Personally, I can’t imagine anyone not liking ice cream (especially vanilla)… anyways hope you enjoy the story at least!
You gotta love a story with a great synopsis. The synopsis in my opinion plays a great role in attracting your readers even more, and the writing quality is top-notch.
The story is a good one, and the pace of the story is going well in my opinion. However a few things I could say are maybe the editing part of the story, and adding something unique to the story that might make it different from others, so that comments such as "the story has nothing new" or anything similar comes up
There must always be a factor which makes a novel different from others and the unique cultivating method makes this story totally different from others. Some may like it and some may hate it, nonetheless, we must admit that it is very creative. Concerning the writing quality, I must say that I have seen many of the skills you have that I lack in your writing skills. I also love the creative names you give to the characters! Keep up the good work!