I create and translate novels and share them with people like me who just love novels with a passion. I hope to gain experience and publish my own novel someday. Patreon - www.patreon.com/Sniperwoof
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Dude, you literally had AI write the entire damn race for you and one can tell it at a first glance. Funny this is, you didn't even tell what actually happened in the race, which is typical for an AI generated content.
Do you know the name in English?
I love this novel Can we get another chapter today?
This is great! Thanks for the fanfic. Btw, what's the name of the Raw novel for this fic?
Man, AI sure love to use 'determination' a LOT! Like, unusually so.
Bro, did you sign a Exclusive contract or a Non-executive contract? Can you share a bit about it?
You keep switching from Past to Present tense and it makes the read awkward. It's like reading a bunch of monologues instead of a narration, especially because it's First Person PoV.
The PoV doesn't feel like a story. It just feels like him roing random monologues one after another, trying too hard to sound funny.
He turned Super saiyan at the age of Four. He is not four years old.
When will he stop being so Emo and all.