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I liked it quite a lot at the start, but the MC starts to feel more and more like a side character in his own story. Grammar's good, updates are plentiful, the world-building is nice, and the characters (other than the MC) are developing well.
I thought it'd be really bad, but it's actually pretty okay. It's definitely better than most Chinese gacha/system MCs I've read at the very least. I can read it without having to restructure the sentences in my mind, and it's got a decent update rate. I'll just wait and see how the story goes to judge it further. I don't understand how they say it's written by ai though, can someone please elaborate on that part?
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Did the author forgot that he gave the mc a system? It hasn't appeared for quite a while now.
YES!!! He didn't escape!
It's not as bad as I thought it would be. But the simulations could have been implemented a lot better. The world-building is good, but the fic carries the hallmarks of every overpowered harem-seeking protagonist story. Depending on your mood, it can be a fun read or a very exhausting one.
Thanks for translating! The other one's so headache inducing I gave up on it.
It's still a bit too early on to tell. And calling it trash at this stage when there are so many more fics out there that somefuckinghow still have 5 stars when they're not even legible is utterly bizarre to me.
Not a bad start, looking forward as to how it plays out. It's still too early to judge, but hopefully it'll pick up steam soon enough. The writing quality is nice, it's legible and doesn't hurt my eyes which is far more than many fics here can attest to. Hopefully, author-san won't sacrifice quality for quantity later on.
The premise was good, and it started out well in spite of some grammatical errors. But it eventually fell flat, and started to become harder and harder to read. This has potential, but it needs an editor or at the very least a beta-reader.