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it would be really funny if they tried to strong arm her, like what can they even do? if fate servant rules still apply to her she literally cant be harmed by things that dont have enough "mystery"

im pretty sure king arthur coming from myth to reality would be one of the best options, most other heros from mythos have some pretty dark motives and arthur was just a kid that became king and tried his best.

is this the MCU, Comics or a mix of the two? Because Rhongo kinda just sweeps the MCU but would be mid-top end for the comics

you should try sticking to one POV unless you use a scene brea because it can be really confusing to read. like "as i'm walking over to my refrigerator after putting her phone in her pocket" implies one character (1st pov) is putting someone elses (3rd pov) phone into their pocket.

also depending on if you keep Rhongomyniad's (if this is the version you're using) personality it would be really hard to convincibly fall in love with more than one person. this is just my opinion and its you're story but im excited to see which direction you take this.

i don't think making a harem for your first fic is a good idea, excluding my own bias against them they're really hard to write properly. you have to give each member a valid reason as to why they would be willing to share. You would also need to set aside a substantial amount of time into developing their character so they're not just a cardboard cut out of a character. id also like to point out harems are inherintly and unbalanced relationship where most members usually lose any agency they would have in the story and historically speaking where only transactional relationships where the harem members actively gain something like political power, wealth, protection, ect for their participation.

ye i agree, i don't think Marika knew about rannis plan. although I do think she planned the shattering, too many things she has done don't make sense otherwise. Like allowing the giants flame to exist and leaving one giant left to guard it, banishing Godfrey and the tarnished to get stronger for when they would return and fight again. to some other things with melinas purpose as the kindling for the giants flame. I remember reading an interesting take on Marika somewhere else. She is eternal, she is cruel to everyone, even her own children, and she does not forgive or forget someone's sins, not even her own. anyways cool story, I don't agree with miquellas' age being all that good, but it's refreshing to see another take on it while developing an interesting story.

I think he meant if Marika knew about rannis plan and allowed it to happen

poor greyoll, I'd feel more bad if she wasn't worth so many runes and 5 dragon hearts.

public library?