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haven't read it yet but 5 stars to balance the stupid one star

it's a fanfiction calm down

And dw, I'm happy that I'm receiving feedback so I don't see it as negative

that was the whole point. the orphanage ist't sponsored by anyone. she's just doing it on her own.

yeah transfiguration really is a Ctrl v

yeah you're right 😭 I've not thought about that. my thought was that it was a really poor orphanage made by Rosie who was kicked out of her family. so she has no real support from the government or her family and has to do it all by herself. but I'll think of a way to make it better. tysm for pointing it out!

Yes, I always love the fics where they go indepth with the magic so I'll try my best to do the same

I'm not sure. I might use a character like Matilda Weasley. but I won't use the ancient magic system.

Thank you for pointing it out! I'll change it tomorrow

definitely a no to harem. I'm new to writing and not yet sure how to write a good romance scene without making it too cheesy but romance is planned