HX_Gas

honestly, i can only say i like it. the plot in particular i really like, ussually youd expect like system or maybe "golden finger"(thats what chinese people call it) or essentially cheats when someone transmigrates to the world of anime, but usually these things upset the power balance and makes some parts of the novel not make sense. if i had to say though, maybe make aqua more "vulnerable" ? or maybe show emotions or inner thoughts so he seems more human, so far it feels that tinge of unrealism or hole in the stpry where somehow hes able to plan and do all these things without having any difficulty under the so called pretext of practice, after all we are not shown or informed his past life whether hes a genius or a dunce, a lazy person who wants to live a laidback life or a hardworking maniac, well thats it, i like youre story since its just up to 50 chapters rnow from where im reading, it seems to have a lot of potential for worldbuilding. ps: i like how u include the pov of different characters when a big incident happens.

how weak the human mind is......

.......how realistic...........i cant say i like it, but rather then liking it, i was just mesmerized by the sad story.

so basically in this paralel universe, he just left everything in his past behind ?

mood, also nice chapter, ill be supporting this book from now on

niceee new chapter

lofi : hah ?! Si Shiro kenapa beli semua ini ?!

finally another chapter, suprised how fina(na) didnt force kuro to let her follow him

hey author.....i remember a specific guy on twitter with this kind of story meeting for calli and kiara......are u by any chance the guy ?

Nice, personally love the character. i started to know you from your other works like HoloAlter. Looking forward to your future works. -random reader