LordOrpheus
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LordOrpheus12dに返信 DipolarHen43477If I were to do that I'd get racist comments :D
[Author note: By the way, the MC is not a self-insert. He's inspired by the MC from Mushoku Tensei actually. He may or may not have some questionable opinions about women and how the world works. Please do not take anything Ky says seriously. He's an idiot and an incel.]- LordOrpheus12dに返信 Time_walker
This one is definitely goofy in some parts
[Author note: By the way, the MC is not a self-insert. He's inspired by the MC from Mushoku Tensei actually. He may or may not have some questionable opinions about women and how the world works. Please do not take anything Ky says seriously. He's an idiot and an incel.] - LordOrpheus13dに返信 Broken_SpiceCh 1 Chapter 1: Rebirth (Rewrite)
- LordOrpheus13dに返信 Pagemaster0743Ch 1 Chapter 1: Rebirth (Rewrite)
- LordOrpheus13dに返信 Benoit_Valtin
- LordOrpheus14d発表
Hello new and old readers! I deleted all reviews, both good and bad because I don't want old, irrelevant opinions to impact the new version of the story. It was at a 4-star total if you're curious, so no I did not delete the reviews because they were bad. People either said it was the greatest thing since sliced bread or absolute dumpster fire trash (I agree with this take). However, I decided to rewrite it and make Ky act a little more like a real human being rather than a caricature of a pervert. He's still very much a pervert, just not an actual psychopath who should be arrested. No, he did not like little kids before if you see anyone say that, that is a complete lie. I still want this story to be about an incel becoming a normal person though so if that isn't your thing don't read this. I might make a few more adjustments though. I might even delete the bath chapter entirely. Rereading what it once was, I can't believe webnovel didn't ban me
- LordOrpheus14dコメント
I decided to rewrite the book. This time, Ky is still pretty unlikeable but he isn't terrible scum of the Earth like he was before. Basically, I am going to take this story seriously this time around because there were some pretty decent ideas in the 30 or so chapters I did complete. In other words, I am removing the cartoonishly ridiculous rancid traits about Ky and making him more of just a regular person who has some unlikeable traits. I still want to keep the identity of him progressing from an incel.
Ch 1 Chapter 1: Rebirth (Rewrite) - LordOrpheus15dに返信 Mr_M_B_Smith
what the...
'Joseph Rodriguez. Deletes all records, all camera footage, and burns down the entire motel before jumping into the fire himself and dying.' - LordOrpheus5mthに返信 Anonny_Anonymous
You spent your time reading through 23 chapters of a story you dislike, leaving negative comments throughout your entire journey. Me Personally, I just drop the book. So yes, you are the loser. You wasted hours of your own time 😭😭 This story is meaningless to me. Your rude comments are meaningless to me. It’s more so like you’re a big on my windshield that can’t find it a way out through my open window. Just annoying really. If you want to get under my skin, go comment under something I actually put heart in lol
Ch 4 Chapter 4: First Day of School - LordOrpheus5mthに返信 Anonny_AnonymousCh 22 Chapter 21: Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters
- LordOrpheus5mthに返信 Ronin46
He forces the green goblin to swallow one of his own horns until it kills him xD
As a writer, I like to try new things. I wanted to try turning scum into a genuine good person. I've already written a million good guys. I don't care if you like this story or not. To be honest, it pisses me off that this low-effort experiment is more popular than anything I put any real effort into. With just twenty chapters it blew my finished 120+ chapter story out of the water. Point being, leave a one-star review. I find it entertaining to see the reactions. - LordOrpheus5mthコメントIt's on my other account but just look up Hero x Villain Online (ARRPG) if you're interested and I'm sure you'll find it.
- LordOrpheus6mthに返信 Corbin_Penniman
A lot of people sit here and tell the author what to do as if their word is law. That’s what it looked like
- Yes. He will have his own 'robins', but they will be other versions of Spider-Man that we know. For example, Miles, Ben, Gwen, Cindy, or Kaine - LordOrpheus6mthに返信 Corbin_Penniman
I didn’t say that. This suit is just incredibly ugly 😭
They also added a spider symbol on the front of it to act as an insignia, while also acting as a target for gunfire. The kevlar was focused right at the chest since they figured that would be where most gunmen would be aiming. To further increase the odds, they added a spider-shaped target to lure their gunshots. - LordOrpheus6mthに返信 Corbin_Penniman
No thanks as in Im the author and will do it the way I want/planned. Not the way some random dude commented
- Yes. He will have his own 'robins', but they will be other versions of Spider-Man that we know. For example, Miles, Ben, Gwen, Cindy, or Kaine - LordOrpheus6mthに返信 Corbin_Penniman
No thanks
- Yes. He will have his own 'robins', but they will be other versions of Spider-Man that we know. For example, Miles, Ben, Gwen, Cindy, or Kaine - LordOrpheus6mthに返信 Corbin_Penniman
No thanks... but you’re free to do your own version
They also added a spider symbol on the front of it to act as an insignia, while also acting as a target for gunfire. The kevlar was focused right at the chest since they figured that would be where most gunmen would be aiming. To further increase the odds, they added a spider-shaped target to lure their gunshots. - LordOrpheus6mthに返信 Corbin_PennimanCh 4 Distributor