Xiphos_Gladius_03

Alright, we're the training and the plotting? I feel like the fanfic is deviating from its original path

What can One Piece characters do to True several thousand hands? Not even whitebeard would survive it

Indeed!

Yeah, too much AI

"can survive without oxygen for days". You had him knocked out in a few minutes without it. Hulk isn't a normal, baseline human being. Again, hulk physique is top tier in marvel, so him being able to go without air for days isn't unrealistic.

Fireeee! The MC is perfect... no egotistical tendencies or any desires for a harem. Simply trying to live a troubleless life. I like how you scaled the world's power to give him some challenges. Makes me think this is A Song of Ice and Fire of Ice and Fire instead of the TV series. I hope you see the story to its completion.

CAPPPPP! It screams plot! Hulk can survive without oxygen for days. Don't throw this young crap

Beautiful story! This deserves so much more love. The interaction between the characters feels so real and emotion-inducing. I hope you can see this story to the end.

Plottt...

The story stopped making much sense as it went on. First, how did visery's escape? Second, how did he hatch his dragon egg that turned to stone without sacrifice and blood? Third, everything screams plot and doesn't seem logical. Like, why did Aerion wait for so long to hatch his egg if Kinavra was there the whole time?