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A one time read to pass time . Nothing more than that. MC takes random mob into his harem for no reason. The only one which made sense is Orihime. Also , it’s as if the moment women see him , they want to sleep within the next 24 hours. 0 chemistry or story between them. The plot progression is incredibly slow. There was one stretch of chapters where literally nothing happened , just him doing some random flirting. The MC is also incredibly rude , ignorant and hypocritical.
There is no way. Bro is making reasons for manipulating a memory of a girl who never really meant any harm. He didn’t even try to explain anything to her first time they met.
I am really this close to dropping this fic man. There is no character development, extremely slow plot progression in the romance is so so rushed. It’s like the women see him, and the next moment they want to sleep with him.
Rude
Stop this gimmick man 😂 you barely gave two shits about her but suddenly your heart aches. I’ve seen random Chinese authors writing better chemistry in their harem novels and that’s saying something
I’m not even trying to be rude, but that’s kinda on you. Even some famous mangakas don’t try to juggle their work yet here you are
Hypocrite
I harness, don’t know how you got a patreon based on this shit writing man
She doesn’t even know him….
Other, I have no idea what you are trying to do when you wrote this, but the way she is acting is like a patient from an asylum . Making up scenarios in her mind, scratching yourself, etc