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Good to have you back. As someone that went trough the same I completely understand. Hope the writing this novel helps you lifting your emotional state. If not you can consider writing a novel that make you feel good. Hope you don’t stop because you have the talent!
I dont think she lost memories, i believe she lost sence of self or something similar to that, not the memories, i read long time ago but I think her father even restore her memories in order for her to come back almost the same. The reason for this was to remove her trauma that was making her suffering.
I have to say I read all novels from alezki and I feel he is one of the authors with best potencial in webnovels. Character design, character development and character relationships. Very few novels does this well here but this author pull it very well. Where the author fails the most until now is the second half of the story, one novel was interrupt when and the other drop in quality in the middle. I am liking this one until now, feels like a big improvement in world building. Hope you can keep same quality until the end. If yes you can be consider one of the best authors here.
The most underrated Novel in webnovels, I really can’t understand why is not in the top 5 golden tickets every month, not even in the top 10. You have novels there that don’t deserve the spot or are having serious update issues. I think novel position is connected to author pay and this author is between the line of being on of the best in the website and being to good to be here. Hope you start a new novel in the future.
Like the path the story is taking and the style is one of my favorite. If I have to give a suggestion is to reduce a little bit the morons side of the story. This is the kind of young master owns the world and gets slap in the face, but this kind of characters should get a bit less story time to improve the pacing. Also I feel a bit sad when we get 1 character that is so bad that ruins a good story, sometimes is the MC, other times is antagonist, in this one it’s is friend Leonel. The dude have a 5years old brain and no common sence and MC instead of educate him his supporting his decisions. please upgrade him to at least a 12 years brain so he can tell right from wrong!
Really good story. Until now if I have to compare with RWTSS I would say I like more the beggining of this one. I didint like RWTSS so much in the beggining because of the shepherd thing and the strong feeling of country bumpkin the main chapter has until much later on the story. In case of this story is more rpg and good vibe from the beggining, like it allot. Also the necromancy in a good boy story feels good until now. The only negative point to me is that the 2 main characters in the 2 novels are basically the same but with diferent name, but i understand that its probably a method for author to guarantee quality and updates without getting confusing. Looking foward for more updates[img=recommend]
This novel does right what 99% of the novels does wrong! Feelings! You can feel the characters and how they relate with each others, most of the times in a very intensive way, but surprisingly it always feels right, and the fact that we are talking about vampires with super intensive emotions it’s even better. I can feel the author has a high emotional intelligence, very rare in this type of novel, makes you one of a kind. Keep the good work.
I read the 300 chapters but I cant take anymore! The main character is so gullible that in a normal cultivation world he should be dead 10/10! You should start story with him 5years old and slowly devolp is character. I can understand he is a farmer boy, but after 300 chapters he didint change even a little even if he says he does… Also the pacing is super slow, seems like a diary of every little thing he does. The characters are ok, altough the characters description go from non existence to very little, but they have life in them. but the dialog is not good. No emotion in the story.
The story is good, to much focus on the fights and little on dialogues and relationships. There is so many typings mistake that I get my head fuzzy! Is the worst I have seen on Webnovel until now! This should be regulate by the Webnovel, should not be allowed. Worst of all is the constant wrong names, I have to spend lots of mental energy to try to understand what actual character is taking about! In some cases is just impossible to understand! For example the first girlfriend he has, having a hard time discovering her real name, some time have the name of his friend, other times have the name of his grilfriend friend!! This is not just about being bed at English, I think this author might have some natural issues in real life remembering some things and translate to the novel. My advice is you are actualy a good author based on the story itself, but you need a damn good editor to work very close to you and decipher what you really mean, not just English fixing. See ya 👋🏼