Nina_Buezo

Best story I've read in a long time. it's so funny sometimes.

Sounds interesting! My like of story hope the rest lives up to the beginning!

Strong FL, sounds like a good story. I will continue reading .

another waste of money on this chapter . it you hit a mind block? What's with all the repetition !

NO, THEY'RE GOING TO BE SEPARATED! NOOOO! NO NO NO! She'll be 15 when she comes back! Will he have missed her? Aaah, can't wait!!!!!

okay, switching names so early in the story! Like I've mentioned before, get a note pad, write down each character's name and and who they are in the story to help you, the author, keep track of your characters to portray them correctly.

Please Author, learn the proper pronouns for each gender. Male (man, boy) = HIM, HIS, HE Female (woman girl) = SHE, HER, HER'S

the story is great

Well author you should have told us about this problem at the end of the previous chapter instead of making us pay for this useless chapter. How about you give us a free chapter later.

Really like the FL and ML. I have the feeling that he already knows her from before or the girl she was before she transmigrated and not the girl who was Robert's girl friend.