Yatenwhaleji
night sky whale.
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Yatenwhaleji6 months agoに返信 Talulah_21personally i can concentrate better when i cross my legs thats why i also made Shin do it.
- Yatenwhaleji7 months agoに返信 shadow_serpent
Means he cannot access/use that ability yet until he meets the requirements to unlock it
- Yatenwhaleji7 months agoに返信 Medas_Morningstar
I know I forgot there is a description later.
- Yatenwhaleji7 months agoコメント
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
- Yatenwhaleji7 months agoコメント
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
- Yatenwhaleji7 months agoに返信 tobimadara
he doesn't. Thanks for pointing it out. It should be only child not only son
この段落は削除されました。 - Yatenwhaleji7 months agoに返信 AkiraMei_
Thank you for all the comments and advice I will be putting it to good use. To improve my writing and will in the near future rewrite the earlier chapters.
- Yatenwhaleji8 months agoに返信 AkiraMei_
thanks a lot now that I'm reading all your comments I can see a lot of things I can improve on. I will be keeping everything you said in mind in the ongoing chapters and will try to improve.
- Yatenwhaleji8 months agoに返信 AkiraMei_
yes
- Yatenwhaleji8 months agoに返信 AkiraMei_
Yes, it is should I make that more clear?
