Not_Aaryan

tbh author if you are sending him to the verse of Danmachi, make sure he gets Bells Aunt Alfia somehow.

Author, it would be nice if you did a long fanfic on Honkai Impact 3

Which world would he be travelling to next?...my suggestion would be something western like Eminence In Shadow.

You might be thinking that I was joking with my comment on the template but I had a solid reason behind adding Nephis as a love interest...I have noticed that Nephis always has to suffer whenever she is with sunny....first was at the end of the first nightmare where sunny killed caster of Han Lee clan due to his ignorance and impatience whereas he could have captured and used him as the last beacon and exit the first nightmare together with Nephis and the second was when Nephis came out of her second nightmare and she decided to infiltrate the one of the three clans to destroy them from the inside but when sunny heard that instead of asking for her feelings,intentions and plans, he went his own way without saying a proper goodbye....sunny being a doofus in understanding feelings also contributes but it's just Nephis is my fav character in shadow slave and I can't see her suffer...if this fic also makes her suffer due to the fate thing then it would not be worth it....I just put how things look in my perspective....yours can be different from mine bc everyone has a different perspective on what we read so however you decide to proceed is good.

You can add this girl as the love interest and add Nephis too and make a love triangle...that would be intresting seeing a cold beauty and changing star in a love triangle tbh...haha.

well I saw that you started releasing a new fic on dxd...I would have loved if you continued the unique fanfic's you have been releasing like a fanfic on Azure Lane or shadow slave but it is what it is....keep up the good work.

This story has the potential to reach a place like Endless Path and Danmachi : Reborn with the powers of Emiya if the author updates daily and does the story development well.

I suggest you drop this part of the fanfic and make Leylin reincarnate in shadow slave as Sunny or a cousin of Nephis, where the magus in him tries to solve the profound mysteries surrounding the spell and the world