Shaka_De_Virgo

I didn't understand, the type of the tentacles was a god or not? the characters refer to him as evil god but then call him demigod, please decide and be clear.

Is this harem? or does it even have romance?

You're telling me that when I become much more powerful than I would be in your home world because DC is from a weaker cosmology? if so you should have explained it like this from the beginning, so everything makes more sense.

seriously they are divine beings but they can't destroy planets? as devils will survive in DC, Superman even in his weakest form can bust planets with fists, without mentioning all the other disgustingly strong beings of Marvel and DC

A version of Mahoraga.

Tftc

Their attitude reminds me of Nejire, I hope they meet in the future.

So I'm not harem? that advance of relationship so meaningless, they know each other for a very short time and it seems that they already love each other madly and even think about children, I don't want to offend but you're making this story go away, the concept is good and everything but the execution is being terrible, maybe you should rewrite the whole fic.

The protagonist is taking so long to discover blue that I don't want to think about it as soon as it took to discover red and better not talk about purple or the expansion of domine, at this point I think he won't have an expansion of domine.

I think like you, it's going to be the classic drama that the protagonist's love interest will be a villain or something like that and the protagonist will be devastated by his betrayal, it seems too obvious.