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OliveTwisted1dコメントCh 18 The king ch 18- OliveTwisted2dコメント
Thanks for the chapter! ❤️ I hope MC gets more traits eventually, especially the "nature's ear" (I think it was called?) that was right underneath where he first was when he entered this world. Although it's similar to his gift it's less detailed, doesn't use mana and would probably give him an affinity with nature and earth. I'm worried someone else would get to it first, especially since it seems to be the place where humans from earth appear in this world lol
Ch 36 Mana Mage - I - OliveTwisted3dコメントCh 15 Chapter 15 Preparations for First Battle
- OliveTwisted3dコメントCh 14 Chapter 14 - Vampire struggle
- OliveTwisted4dコメントCh 35 'Fate has its Ways' - II
- OliveTwisted6dコメント
She never even knew him in the first place... she pretty much just saved a few human villages on a whim lol
As the attendant hurried away, Erik allowed himself a brief moment of introspection. The image of the flaming angel, Ursula, lingered in his mind. Her abandonment had been a catalyst for his transformation and his resolve. He had to know: would she recognize him now, after all he had become? - OliveTwisted6dに返信 Dragon_7454
Okay great, thank you for responding to my concern! I love this novel, can't wait for chapters to catch up to the original, the last chapter of the original was amazing and I'm excited to read what happens next ❤️
"Copying talents..." Ian said with a dazed expression. "It's something unheard of in the thousands of years of human history." - OliveTwisted6dコメント
Why does he keep talking out loud, really? I'm worried about what else has changed from the original, I thought it was rewrite not fundamentally changing the novel but maybe I was wrong
"Copying talents..." Ian said with a dazed expression. "It's something unheard of in the thousands of years of human history." - OliveTwisted6dコメント
In the original novel, he mocked protagonists bad habit of thinking out loud during this part, now it seems like he's picked up that bad habit himself. MC was perfect the way he was
"Alan Lockwood..." Ian muttered to himself as he remembered Alan's sudden outburst in the classroom, his way of addressing the teacher, and his words after he got up. - OliveTwisted7d発表
I'm leaving this review to praise the potential of this novel and the talent of the author. I'm extremely picky when it comes to my reading preference and this novel, at least until the most recent chapter at the time of this review, fulfills and surpasses all my requirements. The MCs personality and choices are truly my favorite, the plot progression is well done and unique, the world background is well thought out and explained, the other characters feel alive and have their own personalities and goals (I even love the occasional pov changes to the og protagonist) and the writing quality, while not the best ever, is wonderful considering English is not the authors first language. As for the update stability, I sincerely hope this novel will continue once the author is up for it. Please give this novel a read, I promise you won't regret it! ❤️
- OliveTwisted7dコメント
I believe this novel has potential. It may not be the future you envisioned or as stable as you deserve but in my experience, that's life. I've had to re-imagine my future hundreds of times already. I'm not telling you to "get over it" or anything like that. Curse the gods, hate fate. I just want to say, whatever you're feeling now might be easier to deal with if you channel it through an outlet. Rage, resentment, sadness whatever. As far as I and your other readers are concerned, you're already an author ❤️
Ch 16 Notice - OliveTwisted8dコメント
Which realm is he in? Or are all three realms part of every galaxy? Are the realms even physical places? So far this reminds me of breath of creation but way more confusing and way harder to read... I might be reaching my limit
The galaxy resembled a celestial masterpiece, its swirling arms and radiant core drawing Hiroshi in with their mesmerizing beauty. It was the closest-looking galaxy to the Milky Way, a beacon of light and possibility in the vast expanse of space. - OliveTwisted8dコメント
This is the third time you've explained the afterlife system this chapter, I feel the need to read it though because you could have changed something again... REALLY hope this improves in future chapters, like author said
In the Heavenly Realm, Paradise and the Death Temple represented two paths for souls to embark upon. Paradise offered eternal light and bliss for those who had lived virtuous lives, while the Death Temple provided a place of reflection and guidance for those seeking solace in the afterlife. Both paths offered opportunities for spiritual enlightenment and growth, reflecting Hiroshi's belief in the inherent goodness of all beings and their capacity for redemption. - OliveTwisted8dコメント
Didn't you just say that the middle realm will have a reincarnation system? I hope these things are explained clearly in later chapters, it feels like you just changed your mind about the afterlife systems right after saying he finished creating them lol
"The afterlife system of the Heavenly Realm will be Paradise and Death Temple. The afterlife system of the Middle Realm will be Heaven and Hell. The afterlife system of the Ashura Realm will be Elysium and Underworld," Hiroshi declared, his voice resonating with authority as he divided the afterlife system of each realm. - OliveTwisted8dに返信 Infinitus_Deos
I need to know, will he eventually forget about making God suffer and accept his new life? Because I'm tired of reading novels that get my hopes up about that and then turn out to be the same as every other novel. If the synopsis says he's gonna make god suffer then I want that to eventually happen, even if it's not right away
- OliveTwisted8dコメントCh 12 Chapter 12 - Possiblity of evolution
- OliveTwisted9dに返信 theSeeker
It's not just "sense of purpose," trust me *crying*
The journey ahead would indeed be full of challenges and uncertainties, but in this moment, as he witnessed the birth of a universe unlike any other, Hiroshi felt a resolute sense of purpose and determination coursing through his veins. He was ready to embrace the challenges that lay ahead, to explore the limitless potential of the cosmos, and to create a universe that would stand as a testament to his creativity and vision.