InfiniteRaider
Just a computer science major who loves to read :)
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I honestly don’t have any criticism for you. If anything I really enjoy the novel, one thing I rlly enjoy is your dialogue between the characters, it is extremely fluid and life like which gives so much depth to the characters and ongoing story. So I really enjoy that aspect. Thank you!
Hello! Shameless author review here! I am excited to share this story with all of you and I hope you enjoy where I take the story as much as I do! This is my first even novel so I will try my best to improve in writing and developing my craft as an author! I would love feedback in areas, you the readers notice! You enjoy system novels? ✅ You enjoy Vast World Building where MC helps in development? ✅ No Harem? ✅ Thank you all! Please enjoy! :)
Overall the book is FANTASTIC! The character development is very good, it’s a subtle progression throughout the whole book which is nice. Also the power system is well thought out and the main character while OP actually has to take time to reach new levels which Is refreshing. You definitely should give it a read!
Overall the story and world building is fantastic! To all new readers, the character development is very well thought out and same with certain things with the plot. The author also writes a lot of fun culture references in almost every chapter and it’s fun to know where they come from! My only critique to this novel is simply how it only gets 1 chapter a week. With how the author writes the story (which I love), the book will never finish with the release of chapters. This would be my only complaint. Overall for where the book is at, it is an amazing story!