Ahaha yes. I'm not really a native English and still have more to go in my writing style. I am delighted you pointed the areas I could improve. Thank you so much for the honest review, I really appreciate it. Hoping to learn more from you Stormzz💕✨

Thank you pedro_corti✨

Ahaha yes! Thank you so much for the feedback @hidingpanduh.♥️ Hoping to learn more from you💕✨

Thank you Wayne✨

Thank you saromaru✨

Thank you so much for the feedback.♥️ Hoping to learn more from you💕✨

I don't often read horror stories but I got hook by the author's exquisite narration and intriguing plots and characters. To top it all, it's all free yay! Definitely saving it in my library. Keep up the good work author👍💕 Cheers to more reading ventures with this novel✨

Exquisite writing style and character design✨. The novel is fast-paced and intriguing. I enjoyed reading this a lot and somehow, it gave me a Harry Potter vibes in the first chapter haha at the same time it's not. I really appreciate the effort the author put in this book. Such a well-written story, definitely worthy to recommend. Great job Author👍💕And goodluck with the contest🤩

lol 😂

Hermoine vibes

The concept of immortality is intriguing. I'm looking forward on how will you give it more depth as the story and character progresses. I like how it felts like i'm watching an anime through your writing style though, haha it's unique as well as the world background. A fascinating read. Great work author! 👍💕

oh my god, I can't imagine this😂

I don't get why the review section here is still empty but I'm glad to be the first one to rate this story♥️✨. The novel is so well written and really interesting. You're totally missing out a package deal story if you leave this book out. The vivid descriptions, explanations and the well thought plot makes it a fascinating read. It shows the authors knowledge in this genre. There is an occasional splash of funny scenes too, I couldn't help but chortled. Overall, I can only say, I'll definitely recommend it to anyone especially sci-fi enthusiast. Author, you did a really great job👍💕

I love the clock technology and quantum synced crystal though

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So true

Yes, Alexander the Great, isn't it? 😂

I love the vivid description of emotions. 😭♥️ It made you feel closer to the characters and empathize. The story is relatable and deep. Definitely an interesting story to follow. Aside from some missing and misplaced punctuations that needs improvement, I love the overall development of this novel. Author, great job👍💕